Reviews for Ash and Misty: Sub Zero
Guest chapter 8 . 8/17/2016
More plz
abbybookworm123 chapter 8 . 1/14/2016
did they die? loved the book to:)
SpencerDorman chapter 8 . 12/11/2015
Great story just don't forget to update eventually!
Guest chapter 8 . 3/18/2015
This is the 4th fanfic I've read in a row that hasn't been finished. Which is disappointing because all of them are really good.
pokelover102 chapter 8 . 1/8/2014
I need to know what happens next I love story please up date soon
pokelover1026 chapter 8 . 12/19/2013
This is really good I would love to read more
Shiny girantina chapter 8 . 8/13/2013
Totally awesome keep it up
I'll Eat Yourself chapter 8 . 12/1/2012
"Heh...yeah, that was one of those rare occasions when a woman actually liked me. Too bad I wasn't interested!" What the heck is Brock talking about? The previous thought involved Misty liking Ash, not Brock. o_O And if you just mean that she didn't hate him, then that has happened plenty of times. Ivy was one of them. Then there was that one girl he rode in a truck with, only to find out afterward that she had a boyfriend. Also, you should update this now. I can understand long breaks because I haven't been doing much writing myself, but I favorited this a LONG time ago, like three years ago I think, and despite not actually reading it until now (I had favorited it intending to read it later on), I know for a fact that the last time it was update was four years ago. GET WORKING ALREADY!
I'll Eat Yourself chapter 7 . 12/1/2012
Before I mention anything else, I am going to point out something I noticed before I even read through the first chapter: in the chapter drop-down menu, it says "Awaiting Deah" instead of "Awaiting Death". Oh yeah, and I forgot to mention that the previous chapter wasn't that long, although it may have been kinda long compared to your other stuff. Some of the best stories I have read on here and Deviantart have had chapters far longer. Now, about this chapter, I am pretty sure that Articuno appearing to lost travelers has nothing to do with them disappearing, but rather with their return to safety. After all, they are legendary pokemon for more than just one reason, and the only ones I can think of that actually mean harm to others are Mewtwo and maybe Giratina, but I don't know much about Giratina other than it was banished to the distortion world, so I can only guess what it did to deserve that. XD
I'll Eat Yourself chapter 6 . 12/1/2012
Alright, so one problem right now. First off, you'd think Ash would use a pokemon against the Mamoswine, as he always has before, especially since it's hard to prove your endurance over that of a Mamoswine when you can't use any attacks. Secondly, even though Ice Beam is one heck of a move, I doubt it would knock out Ash like that, not unless he became frozen. Lastly, if Ash lost the challenge, shouldn't the Mamoswine have tried to kick them out of the cave?
I'll Eat Yourself chapter 5 . 12/1/2012
Not only was I laughing after Team Rocket's little intro, but when I read "Wo-b-b-ba...f-f-ett...", I immediately thought of Boba and Jango Fett from the Star Wars series. XD How did such a relation in naming never occur to me!? It makes me wonder if the name/suffix "fett" actually means something.
I'll Eat Yourself chapter 4 . 12/1/2012
Um, just one problem. Piloswine is part ground type (trust me, I looked it up to make sure before making this claim), so Pikachu's electric attacks would have absolutely no effect on it. I realized this when I remembered that I think I actually tried using an electric type on one once (it may have been a swinub instead) and it said it had no effect. I immediately realized it was probably also a ground type, due to its brown color and the whole nature of it resembling a mole as a swinub and a powerful mammoth after evolution.
I'll Eat Yourself chapter 3 . 12/1/2012
I read the first paragraph and found myself greatly hoping that nobody would die in this story. There's a reason not many of my favorites, IF any, are tragedies. On another note, Brock is quite the idiot when it comes to romance. I mean, he keeps trying to get Ash and Misty together, despite the fact that they probably already would if he didn't keep ruining the moment whenever one was about to confess. And as an extra, how did he know they were going someplace cold if the prof. didn't tell them? XD
I'll Eat Yourself chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Alright, first off, since when does Misty have a mallet? Secondly, you'd think the great professor would have the sense to tell Ash and co. that they would be going someplace cold and to prepare for such weather. Lastly, I'm surprised Brock hasn't been poisoned by poison jab even once. XD You'd think he would end up getting poisoned right there in the pokemon center at some point and end up making Croagunk's attempt pointless due to Brock needing immediate treatment. XD
zak chapter 8 . 6/24/2012
that was awsome you must complete it
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