|Reviews for Pacifist Paranoia|
| EirSensei chapter 1 . 11/15
I thoroughly enjoyed this . Your writing skills are smoother than some other stories I've read, that makes it much more enjoyable. I look forward to more of your writings .
| Ed Sheeran's Fangirl chapter 1 . 4/25
I love how you made kon relatable he deserves better
| A Guest chapter 1 . 1/1
Really enjoyed this fic. I liked the idea, especially the idea of Kon being more than a comic relief, and the whole killing tid bit. I liked the fluffy bit at the end, too. Keep on writing!
| borednerdsunited chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
ACK! Struck down by the brilliant fantastical epic awesome that is Pwnage-Kon plus sick Ichigo! Love love love love looovveee :)I totally agree with you; Kon is a seriously underestimated character in Bleach, and deserves more canon coolness apart from being a perverted stuffed lion ]
I really really really loved this fic, and in case I've missed out on telling you this before; I really like your writing! I was over the moon when I discovered you wrote Bleach fics after reading all your One Piece stuff, so keep up the good work! I hope you'll write some more Bleach stuff in the future, and thanks for a lovely read!
Sorahime the Azn ]
| Silent-Sarcasm chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
I love it. The final scene was done so right. You really cuaght kon's character and ichigo's too.
| Waf chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
I loved this.
It's great that you breathed more life into Kon. He had so much potential, but was left off on the sidelines. :(
I look forward to your future fanfic endeavors. Your stories always seem to have such a spark!
| xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
| Katkid chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
One of the things that frustrated me about the manga was that Kon had a TON of potential for development when he was introduced and that potential never really went anywhere beyond "perverted stuffed lion". (Although I have to admit I didn't get very far beyond the Soul Society arc, so maybe I missed something down the line.) It is so refreshing to see Kon not reduced to one-dimensional comic relief here. Despite the fact that we don't see the "usual Kon", you do a great job keeping him and all the other characters in believable.
I thought the conversation at the end between Kon and Ichigo was especially well done. There wasn't a whole lot of dialogue in this piece (actually, none until the end, I think), but your dialogue has a nice flow to it and I could easily imagine Kon and Ichigo having a conversation exactly like that.
I'll have to keep an eye out for any other Kon stories by you!
| Hat O' Doom chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Nice story. It was nice to see a serious Kon for once.
| Nelarun chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
This is brilliant. I love the way you wrote Kon (I'm really disliking how he's mostly used for comedy relief). I thought that his dilema - to break his own rules or to lose a friend - was wel played out and I thought the ending was perfect! Well done on that!
| Cheezer-One chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Hello, I've just read Pacifist Paranoia and, my God, what a wonderful job! I've always loved Kon, and have always hated how its almost impossible to find any good stories about him that well reflect his more serious side. A lot of people just seem to forget, or think it's easier to let him remain as the comic relief, but honestly, he's got a lot of potential for a good fic all of his own-which you've done not only one, but two of.
I really do love the relationship you've established between Kon and Ichigo. I love how you've also kept Ichigo in character to being able to recognize whens someone's going through a rough patch and even if he doesn't know how to approach them or what to say (nobody ever called Ichigo tactful, after all) he at least acknowledged that Kon was suffering because of him-and almost nobody remembers to do that.
You bring up so many wonderful points and comparisons with Kon-how all he wants to do is exist, and even though he has the strength and (sometimes) the know-how, that he doesn't want to fight because it's always just a play at, or a road to death and pain and everything Kon hates and tries to avoid. I also really liked that when Kon resolved to fight the hollow, you didn't immediately put him in what I call Terminator-Mode. He still had some residual doubts and unwillingness to kill the monster, and took his time beating around the bush, knocking off legs to try to incapacitate it until Ichigo was put in danger and he really did have to end the fight then and there.
I'm so totally adding this, On the Run and you to my favorites. I hope that you'll write more for Kon, since you're one of the very, very few authors out there who both understand my favorite character and are willing to write something tangible and real for him. I myself have a story idea for Kon, but it's nothing that'll be ready for posting for a long, long time. T.T
(Crossing her fingers that you'll post another Kon story soon.)
Thanks for the wonderful read!
~Your new fan.
| Caitriona695 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
I think you did a lovely job of showing us a completely different side of Kon. We mostly view him as the comic relief and little better than Keigo. In reality he was created as a Mod soul to attack and destroy Hollows. I like the path you took with it.
| Golden-Falcon101 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Wow. This was a brilliant story! It was really well written as well, and had a nice ending. (:
| kitsunelover300 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Yeah, Kon needs more recognition for his views on existence. They shoud do this more often in the anime and manga. Kon is definetly one of my favorites just after Hichi-kun and Ichi-kun. Good job!
| Taryn Streambattle chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Ok, I'll say right off the bat: I didn't really like Bleach. I liked the characters, but not the plot, so I quit reading when Rukia got taken. (RukiaBitch)
However, THIS was amazing! Kon is one of my favorite characters, and would be my favorite if he weren't a PERVERT...
I really think you captured his serious side... a side that people tend to ignore. I really especially liked these paragraphs:
If Kon had had a heart, it would have felt as though it were being stabbed right then. The modsoul didn't want to think about it. About the way the mask had crumbled under his bare feet, how the blood slipped between his toes, how the hollow had screamed as he eradicated it, how he knew that scream was all his fault, that he had caused it...how the face beneath the mask had smiled, tears in its eyes, as it shattered, as though thanking him for his brutality...
"I said, grow up," the modsoul repeated, standing up on tiny cotton legs. He felt like trembling; his sewn body stayed surprisingly calm. "Get that wimpy look off your face. You don't owe me anything." You owe me everything. There's blood on my hands now, even if it is hollow blood. I don't want it there. " I made the choice to engage that hollow, even knowing what it might mean." Even though I didn't. You were supposed to wake up and kill it, dammit. Somebody else should have shown up. Anybody. Why did I have to destroy it? "So grow up, and stop looking like that. If you keep blaming yourself-" you should, it's your fault! "-you're never gonna get better." Yet somehow, I can't really blame you. Damn bastard.
That paragraph captured him PERFECTLY. And how Kon and Ichigo are unable to stand each other, but really care. (Remind you of anyone?) Amazing.. just amazing!