Reviews for To Catch A Raven
The Tygre chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
You know, it's rare that one finds a really good story. I mean, a REALLY good story, the kind of story that changes your perspective on life, writing, all that crap. I can happily say, and with all honesty I mean this, that this is perhaps one of the single best stories I have ever read on . You performed everything flawlessly and beautifully, and your depiction of Jinx and her relationship with Raven simply cannot be rivaled. I wholeheartedly hope that you right a sequel. And now two things before I go:

1. Don't worry about that little water boiler scene at the end. I actually imagined it somewhat like that...what with the cup breaking and all. Yours is the definition of an appropriate erotic scene, clearly defining the line between love and lust, sex and making love. It is incredibly rare that I find such expert work done. Not that I do much looking. Oh no, not I, an upstanding and chaste rakshasa. My harem is for display purposes only...

2. Raven's new form...what color is her hair now? If you say white than I'll have to respond...You stole my idea! I have a whole story-line planned out for a half-demon shape! I've got the rabbit angel of death and ubiquitous Drew Carey and Watership Down references! I've been planning it for two years now! Oh, mein gocht...

Finally, I leave you on this note. Never doubt what you have done here. Let no one tell you your work is inferior or crass. Yours is a sublime gift, which I am happy to have taken part of through witnessing. You have done what any storyteller could ever hope to do: you have touched a person, you have moved their way of thought ever so slightly. And that is something to be infinitely proud of. So sit down, and smoke from the pipe. Take a whiff; this pipe belongs to Ravana you know.

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Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
that was a nice inuendo you left me. and love raven's new form. love the story and I do hope that the epilogue comes soon though it will be sad to see this story end.
Thug-4-Less chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
To quote Carl from Aqua Teen Hunger Force, 'That was friggin' AWESOME!'

The club scene was perfecto and the rest of the their interactions just before the end were sweeter than... sweet tea?

The short interlude with Robin was a little confusing though. Why the hell was he still up and drinking coffee? To make sure Raven didn't blow up the tower?

Besides that it was smooth sailing.
Spikesagitta chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
oh yeah that was hot! nice! not too graphical, but not lacking either :)
Amoefiach chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
Wow, just wow! I absolutely loved your story. The entire thing was amazing including the extremely hot ending. Bring on the sequel!
Mellowyellow11 chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
Well to simply put it I liked it. Not too over the top but well written and thought out, which made your story really easy and fun to read. Cant really think of much to add except, on with the sequel.

Thanks for the great short story

Ron
Mellowyellow11 chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
Nice you didnt fall to the cliché temptation and giving Jinx the prefect job for her.
Blimey The Toad chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
Once again, another nice chapter. Nice and long, as well. I like the combination of dialogue and description, not too much of one or the other. Can't wait to see the next update!
ianob chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
hey, the story is great fun, its nice to see something turn up hats so well laid out and relaxed. its unusual to see something thats not all action, without it seeming slow, your's moves along nicely, keep it up!

thanks for posting.
Thug-4-Less chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
Ah, delicious porno.

Another excellent chapter. Loving the little nods to Riddick and other pop-culture phenomenons.

There were a few spelling/grammatical errors, nothing serious though, and I honestly can not recall how many there were or their exact location. Besides that I've got nothing.

Thanks for writing.
Spikesagitta chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
cool :) love it! keep it up!
Spikesagitta chapter 2 . 9/29/2008
XD nice, enjoy it, can i hope those lawyers burn..? literally? come on, that would be cool!
Spikesagitta chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
cool 7 more steps eh? i need to finish the next 2 chapters then :)
Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 3 . 9/28/2008
oh tha jinx... and poor raven when she goes to her mind scape lol. love the story and can not wait for more.
RedrumRaven chapter 3 . 9/28/2008
Hey great fic… ill be waiting for the next chapter…I hope you update soon.

Greetings bye.
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