Reviews for To Catch A Raven
Spikesagitta chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
oh yeah that was hot! nice! not too graphical, but not lacking either :)
Amoefiach chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
Wow, just wow! I absolutely loved your story. The entire thing was amazing including the extremely hot ending. Bring on the sequel!
Mellowyellow11 chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
Well to simply put it I liked it. Not too over the top but well written and thought out, which made your story really easy and fun to read. Cant really think of much to add except, on with the sequel.

Thanks for the great short story

Ron
Mellowyellow11 chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
Nice you didnt fall to the cliché temptation and giving Jinx the prefect job for her.
Blimey The Toad chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
Once again, another nice chapter. Nice and long, as well. I like the combination of dialogue and description, not too much of one or the other. Can't wait to see the next update!
ianob chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
hey, the story is great fun, its nice to see something turn up hats so well laid out and relaxed. its unusual to see something thats not all action, without it seeming slow, your's moves along nicely, keep it up!

thanks for posting.
Thug-4-Less chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
Ah, delicious porno.

Another excellent chapter. Loving the little nods to Riddick and other pop-culture phenomenons.

There were a few spelling/grammatical errors, nothing serious though, and I honestly can not recall how many there were or their exact location. Besides that I've got nothing.

Thanks for writing.
Spikesagitta chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
cool :) love it! keep it up!
Spikesagitta chapter 2 . 9/29/2008
XD nice, enjoy it, can i hope those lawyers burn..? literally? come on, that would be cool!
Spikesagitta chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
cool 7 more steps eh? i need to finish the next 2 chapters then :)
Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 3 . 9/28/2008
oh tha jinx... and poor raven when she goes to her mind scape lol. love the story and can not wait for more.
RedrumRaven chapter 3 . 9/28/2008
Hey great fic… ill be waiting for the next chapter…I hope you update soon.

Greetings bye.
Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
learning is fun most of the time. and I guess that either you got more reviews or I should be glad that it is the weekend. love the story and it was cut seeing jinx drugged and then her saying that raven was cute even with her eyes. love the story and can't wait for more.
Thug-4-Less chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
Excellent chapter. You're techno/mystical/medical babble is well-done and completely confusing. Heh. The titles of the steps are pretty hilarious and the 'aw' moments are priceless.

I do think the progression of Raven making Jinx her girlfriend is happening a tad too quickly, but it also makes sense that when Raven lets go she REALLY lets go. So I can kind of see how she's like, "I'm doing this thing... so I'm doing it."
Thug-4-Less chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I can perfectly understand getting away from a story as massive as CoD before you burn-out. I peruse Teen Titans on occasion and I am usually not a fan of the stranger pairings but, once again, your talent has won me over.

I think Raven's response was a little OOC at first, but that might just be because we never really get a good look at her, how did she put it, proclivities?

The counter-girl Sam, her description said that she was average, but I didn't think green eyes were that average. Unless everyone wears colored contacts that color. But maybe I'm wrong about that.

Anyway, it was a great opening, and I absolutely loved it when Jinx stole that last kiss. Ha! Just the look on Robin's face, in my head, was priceless.

On to the next chapter.
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