|Reviews for Impromptu Affair|
| The Freaks chapter 20 . 11/10/2016
It's like they're a little family, albiet highly dysfunctional. It's adorable...
| The Freaks chapter 7 . 11/8/2016
His crispy little friend... that was extremely funny, and I love the way you have written the Joker.
| Confuzzled-Neko chapter 23 . 2/19/2016
I reread this often. Just love the dynamics between everyone. Love the princess comments
| Nancy chapter 23 . 4/26/2014
I loved reading this story! It really made me laugh! xD
I hope that you will continue this amusing tale. :)
I know it has been a while since you have written this story, the plot matters little, make up the plot as you go, and just go with the flow, it matches your style!
Looking forward to reading more! :D
| azure1996 chapter 23 . 10/13/2013
Black comedy isn't really my thing but your story was great, I loved every single chapter...
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Wow! So funny and yet in character
| KrnYong chapter 23 . 5/9/2013
Oh the usefulness of a few low-IQ goons. I can't believe Harvey, he actually got the twins even after he prosecuted them! Looks like his past as DA is working well for him. I do wonder what Crane did to make Nigel and Anthony so afraid of him though...
Please continue soon!
| KrnYong chapter 21 . 5/9/2013
Crane's getting prophetic! It's only a matter of time before Two Face steals 2 million dollars in two dollar bills or straps Batman to a giant penny lol
| KrnYong chapter 19 . 5/9/2013
"It was no wonder he was developing a separate personality, Harvey was the type who couldn't stand to be alone." That was an astute observation, I'd never really thought about it like that before.
| KrnYong chapter 18 . 5/9/2013
If I was Crane I'd stick with the free ride too, it beats walking, especially with a headache.
The part where Alfred thought of Bruce as "his boy" was so adorable, he really is a father-figure to Bruce and I feel all warm and fuzzy inside haha
| KrnYong chapter 17 . 5/9/2013
The thought of Crane and Dent walking around in their underwear because they wash all their clothes at once is amusing. On the subject of Crane's height, I also think it's kind of cute. Comics Crane is what, 6', 6'1"? It wouldn't be as adorable if he was taller than/on par with his so-called roommates.
| KrnYong chapter 16 . 5/9/2013
"Leave it to Scarecrow to make a break-neck run from an apartment and still leave it spotless." That one made my day XD
Argh Harley was never my favorite rogue, and she's so annoying here. That's not in any way an insult to your writing, I just am not fond of her.
"Like Beauty and the Beast, they are" made me wonder- who's the beauty and who's the beast? Considering how annoying Crane's been, he might qualify to be the beast this time
| KrnYong chapter 14 . 5/9/2013
Wow, Joker sure is a glutton for punishment. And devious for playing on Harley's crush for him. She'll hate Batman after this one.
"If you just jinxed us, coin or not I will beat you stupid."
"Shut up or I'll poison you." - that exchange had me rolling. Harvey's really embracing being one of the freaks now, isn't he? And as for Crane's narcissim, as amusing as it is I can't help but thinking that you're giving him a bit of the Riddler's personality. I always pictured Nigma as being the more self-obsessed one. Ah well, I still had a blast reading this chapter. On to the next!
| KrnYong chapter 11 . 5/9/2013
Hahahaha Scarecrow's having an affair! Too bad the Joker's having an affair with Harley ;) I find it both sad and hilarious that no matter who he pairs up with, Crane always ends up with the short end of the stick. If only he had the guts to gas Harvey, huh? I also thought it was nice that you're bringing in elements from the cartoon btas into this, it makes everything feel so much more familiar
| KrnYong chapter 10 . 5/9/2013
I really like this :) The Joker is so off-the-wall I can't predict what he'll do next, which is awesome. Crane is perfectly bookish and physically unimpressive, but his astute mind and skill at making chemicals (he made Joker venom!) is very entertaining to see. The development of Harvey's more criminal insane side is also cool, he's becoming more and more like the cartoon Two Face what with the two tone suit and all. I really can't wait to see what's going to happen with Harley- I'm thinking that the three are going to get caught and sent to Arkham again?