Reviews for The Luckless Liars
eenayde chapter 25 . 12/18/2014
I thought this story was gonna be mediocre but it turned out AWESOME.
Zayabel13 chapter 25 . 3/31/2014
KOWAIIIII!
Shinobi Deidara chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
I like the fic, but calm the fuck down, don't demand things.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/11/2013
Aw.. poor Dei-Dei, un! XD
Guest chapter 25 . 1/16/2013
Your fic is amazing *-*
Really loved it
Grimy Paws chapter 25 . 10/13/2012
Good God, Aiko sounds so stupid...
"No idea, nyaa. Tobi says it must be genetic, nyaa."
Uh-huh... Talk about eloquency in a child that's supposed to be 5 years old.
Deidara is the proud father of a fucked-up Dejiko-chan...
Terrible, nyaa. I'm going to slit my throat, nyaa.
Guest chapter 25 . 7/4/2012
i absolutely loved this! XD
fayeswolf chapter 25 . 1/23/2012
well, awesome. that's all i can say. tobi is so adorabe. poor dei... read my fics please?
Kouya-kun chapter 25 . 9/9/2011
Wow, it took me 4 days to read this... 4 FRIKIN DAYS! THAT is how you know I like a story. Because if I don't absolutely love it, I either skim or just stop reading after about 1-2 days of reading. However this was a great plot line, and great writing. I must say, the ending left something more to be desired. I was shocked when it went from Aiko being 1 week old to 5 years old. I felt like I had missed her entire life. And the fact that Sasori still kept in touvh with Aiko felt way out of place. For the majority of the previous chapters, you had made it seem like Sasori wanted nothing to do with Aiko, then all of a sudden he calls saying he needs to talk to his child and wish her happy birthday. But besides that, I absolutely adore this story!
Frootloopasaur chapter 25 . 3/2/2011
Very original, good job.
BAKOOM chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Obito dropped out of school and became a crack addict? I would have never guessed! Nice story. I just finished this chapter and am started the next. :)
Eat Them chapter 25 . 11/27/2010
Love it! I am not quite satisfied with the ending for some reason... Maby cause they grew up and grew farther apart... But it's still a great story! Kinda sad that maddy-kun didn't make an appearance, but still love the story!
Eat Them chapter 24 . 11/27/2010
Oops, I forgot something! The sasori in this was very ooc and I hate him, but I love the real sasori, so I'm kinda sad my sasori didn't make an appearance. I noticed you left out the rituals, tobis mask, itachi and madara/tobis shataringon, konans paper, kakuzus money obsession, and the art arguments, which I miss. But still a GREAT story!
Eat Them chapter 25 . 11/27/2010
Love it! I am not quite satisfied with the ending for some reason... Maby cause they grew up and grew farther apart... But it's still a great story! Kinda sad that maddy-kun didn't make an appearance, but still love the story!
xXx SyroPhoenix xXx chapter 25 . 10/16/2010
This was such an AWESOME read! It's the first fic from the Naruto fandom I've read that isn't centred ar0und Naru-chan and I must say, I wasn't disappointed. Well done, un!(,)
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