|Reviews for Those Who Lie|
| xDelfin chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
| squeetzy chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
thank you for the delightful mind explosions all throughout.
| Lyoness of Avalon chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Oh wow. Amazing! Your story filled out the drawing so fantastically! I loved Reno's unnamed cameo. There is just so much story in this for a one shot I feel like you could have other fics in it.
Also, Roxas saved him anyways! And they got married!
| The Infernal Lady chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
This was fucking brilliant! Amazing. You're a genius.
| SkyeRockette chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Oh my goodness... this is just so amazing! I don't even know where to begin...
The fact that you tied in all the little details, down to what they were wearing, the key around Axel's neck, and the freaking half of a handcuff on Roxas... it was amazing! It was as though you planned this story and THEN Nijuuni drew the picture.
I loved how in character everyone was! You had the right people acting as traitors, the cannon characters who'd teamed up were working together, and Axel was sort of on his own... working with others but having his own agenda! You got his whole look-out-for-only-myself-and-Roxas thing down! And Larxene! That was probably my favorite moment of hers out of ANY fanfic I've ever read. It was so her, and it was brilliant too!
The transitions with Axel's jeep and the song were fantastic! That was honestly my favorite part of this story, just because of how you used it blew my freaking mind! I'm totally going to try writing a moment like that into one of my stories... though the whole time I'll just be thinking about this story and probably get sidetracked!
The face that you had the beginning be the part Nijuuni wrote, and then had a simplified version at the end was so cool! Like, this is writing on a publishing level. That's the kind of things that make books get number 1 on the charts!
The ending, where you said what happened to everyone, made this whole story all the better. I loved hearing about each person, it was like the ending of those based-on-true-events movies! Roxas and Axel's ending was, of course, the best. Tying in Frank was genius, but having Roxas say "I told you so!" just made my day!
Now, as to the whole Roxas almost killing Axel thing... I don't know if you reply to reviews, but it would be awesome if you could answer this! You wrote that Roxas pulled the trigger while the gun was in Axel's mouth, obviously his brains weren't blown out... so does that mean Roxas was faking it? He hadn't loaded a bullet so he wouldn't shoot Axel. He seemed surprised when the shoot came from above (Xigbar?) so I don't think he had that all planned out... but he did show up with Xigbar, so I thought it was entirely possible that they talked about something. Also, the fact that Roxas DID shoot Axel, obviously Roxy has a temper problem, I would have been shocked if he hadn't carried through with his threat. But I'm mostly confused on the first 'shot' he made.
Anyway, as you can tell from the RIDICULOUSLY (sorry!) long review, I adored this story. So. Freaking. Much. I can't wait to go read more of your stories now! Please never stop writing, you're one of the most talented authors I've seen on this sight, and I've seen a lot!
| of cabbages and kings chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
An incredible story, amazing.
Loved the characters and the way you described them.
Kairi clubbed Saix with a bust of Einstein, wow.
| Takara yume chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
best damn thing I ever read. this was just genius...god I am speechless right now. QwQ though kinda am happy that Axel didn't die. and I'm guessing those two got married and eloped XDD ahhh this was seriously brilliant...well done.
| tunachurro chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This... hm. Even if it didn't have the amount of violence you wanted, imo the smut makes up for it hehe *shot*
Anyway, interesting plot, and I can imagine a chapter fic spinning from this if you decided to 8D
| Tofuu chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Freakin' awesome action story. You don't see many of those(or at least good ones) floating around.
I do have a question about one of Axel's lines, "If at first you don't succeed, bullshit, bullshit, bullshit."
Was 'bullshit' meant as a noun or a verb? I know this is kind of a strange question to get hung up on, but it works as either and I was just curious about the actual intent.
I will definitely be checking out your other works and be back for rereads. :)
| Sunny chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
This is amazing asdfghjkl.
You're an amazing writer no doubt about it.
This should have way more reviews LOL
Thank you for writing this...heartheartheart.
| sana-chan9 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
oh my goodness. this story was CRAZY! i'm SO glad demyx got to live, though. i love him :3
and i love axel and roxas! great job on this lololol
seriously. it was so cool. i especially liked how all of the worlds were bars and such. yeah. it was super-nifty ;D
| P5hng-Me-A'Wy chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
oh man, oh man... i was so scared that Roxas was really going to kill Axel. -wipes sweat from forehead and smiles- i'm glad i was wrong.
anyways, AMAZING. this was simply amazing. i read it all in one sit. well kinda i read like 3/4 before i really need to use the restroom. i tried to buff it out and contuine reading but i just couldn't. lol
but yeah, this was a great story and i loved the ending. ]
| inhx chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
... That was, for the lack of better words, F-en awesome!
Definitely a worthwhile read and highly captivating in all areas :)
There's nothing else I can give this story, but praise... And lots of it.
| Yume Nezumi chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
So the first thing that comes to mind, having read this, is; "Hot damn."
The second is that I'm amazed that you got all this from a picture. I should say, I'm impressed. I love that you wrote a full story, not just the one scene that happens in the art, and yet you even managed to tie in the little details like the gloves and handcuff. Even the key for god's sakes. Excellent work. I haven't read a fanfiction this good in a long time.
But seriously, I think my childhood just ran away screaming.
| Jenlinkitty chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Holy crap! I couldn't stop reading! I should be in bed now, but I could NOT stop reading!
My favorite line of the entire story was Xaldin's fate. I sat and rolled around laughing for minutes straight. XD Great touch of comedy in an otherwise serious fic. :3
I'm also glad about the outcomes. No exceptions. (I don't even mind that Marly died - and I cosplay his ass).
On a critical note: The swearing felt a little out of place for Demy.
All in all,... I LOVED IT! It's going on my favorites list for sure!