Ooh wow, I enjoyed this! Thanks for writing :)

AHH.
"It's too small for him, but then everything is. Even her heart wasn't big enough to hold him."
Loved loved this. Jacob and Bella fighting their instinct and finally after 100 years Bella sees who was the best option! So beautiful how their hearts never changed.

This broke my heart! It was so well written. Now i gotta go read some fluff. This was so good!

I come back and read this sometimes. You do such a good job of illustrating how Twilight often reads as a tragedy, not a love story.

Beautifully written. Realistic too

Le sigh. This is very much what I think the outcome should have been.

This is truly the correct ending. Meyer was writing a horror story unknowingly.

Ah my God, it hurts so much.

This is beautiful and heartbreaking. I'm crying, but I like this much more than the books. I always hated Jacob's ending, him imprinting and living for eternity for ness didn't seem like something Jacob would do if given the choice. Thank you for writing this.

Oh. my. god. I'm so sad, but I want more.

This is so heartbreaking.

Damn this is so sad! So well written! Loved it

So heartbreaking. Living forever is not all it is cracked up to be.

I once readhumans live on forever, in the faces of their children.

Bella was so scared of dying that she never got to live.

Dang, this tore my heart apart. I hate that Nessie sat next to him sobbing at the end when she'd been distancing herself for so long. Great angst, very believable. Thank you for writing!

this is fantastic, you're a great writer!