|Reviews for Going Out|
| whistlingawaythedark chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
very sad, but you are right in saying that stuff like this happened. Great writing, keep it up!
| Wander52 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
The way Grissom treated her sucked...
| caz1969 chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
another great ff, I thought maybe a second chapter would be there to click onto lol
| My Kate chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
okay...that sound?...hearts breaking...wonderfully empathetic story...you captured both characters' essence, their loneliness and their inability to be at the same place at the same time...great work...too bad you wouldn't continue with additional encounters that ultimately lead to their coming together...nice job!
| Pandora Lucia chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
I like! And now I want scotch...
| jenstog chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Sad face here! Lovely words as usual with you. I'm sure they had many a' f-ed up times just like this before they became intimate. I need more of your work soon! It's really the first name I look for in my inbox. I don't even wanna write anymore after reading it!
| tikismile chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Perfect.. his resistance, her backing down... perfect.
| DoctorStarlett chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
That was one of the most amazing pieces of writing I've ever read. Your descriptions of the bar, and the characters actions etc were wonderful. In my quest as an aspiring writer - I've always been told "show not tell" and you certainly follow that method too. Please keep up the good work and i agree it is angsty. :-)
| was spratlurid quimby chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Poor Sara Se tried
| GSRCSILVR25 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
SO GOOD! I always wonder about who she called. I could totally see this happening. They must have had moments and conversations like this. Maybe one of those things "that did or didn't happen between us" things Sara mentions in Invisible Evidence? hehehe. Keep on writing! I love your stories!
| alice180789 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
very good again
the end is sad but real and perfect !
I'm waiting for others stories ! lol
| feakinlove chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
i think the last section with the cab was so sad. you write them so well. i am looking forward to your "afterw(o)rds".