Reviews for Choices |
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FrostyFingers chapter 15 . 10/16/2008 omg this is so awesome! i need more of this stuff asap! so love this! |
FrostyFingers chapter 14 . 10/15/2008 more asap! i so love this! |
crokettsgirl chapter 14 . 10/15/2008 Good work Tony! Now Gibbs is liveable with DiNozzo. But I know that Tony is still feeling so guilty and bad but the case comes first so no one else gets hurt. But knowing Tony he'd put himself in the line of fire to repent for what happened and make it all stop. Or dive in front of Gibbs if that happened since he feels it's all his fault...great job and can't wait for more. Sue |
sorgina13 chapter 14 . 10/15/2008 Can't wait for the next chapter |
Deluded Visions chapter 14 . 10/15/2008 It's got a good dose of drama, suspense, angst & involves the whole team with a touch of hurt!Tony. That's good stuff. However I feel Gibbs is way out of character here. He'd never think of blaming Tony let alone opnely blaming him like he's done. Plus the incidents seem to be piling up one on top of another. I guess you're taking major litary license here to amp up the angst? I'm intrigued to see where you're going to take it. |
mikesh chapter 13 . 10/14/2008 Hopefully everything works out and they all have a happy ending! Well except for the nut job person |
Julie250 chapter 13 . 10/14/2008 Great chapter,please update soon. |
sorgina13 chapter 13 . 10/14/2008 Yikes! |
shirik chapter 13 . 10/14/2008 tnx for updating! |
crokettsgirl chapter 13 . 10/14/2008 I'm so glad to see that Kate and Tim are ok. Tony wanting to quit, that's so sad. McGee, I hope can tell Tony what this guy looks like and that will help. I'm glad that Abby stood up to Gibbs about blaming Tony. And Gibbs is sorry but is telling the wrong person. I hope Tony can figure this out and everyone including our Ducky is fine...can't wait for more...great chapter. Sue |
FrostyFingers chapter 12 . 10/14/2008 oh my poor baby! if that guy shots mcgeek and kate as well gibbs will make tony responsable for that too right? aw man! the boy needs some love! i'll gladly give it to him ;) more asap pls |
angeleyes46 chapter 12 . 10/13/2008 keep up the great work. |
crokettsgirl chapter 12 . 10/13/2008 Oh no, who is doing this to Tony? And poor Kate and Tim, I hope that they can get out of there or bring the guy down but not kill him so they can find out who this nut job is. Or Tony can recognize the voice. Oh more guilt for Tony. And I wonder if with this Gibbs will understand that it's not Tony's fault. Oh I need more, please! Sue |
crokettsgirl chapter 11 . 10/13/2008 Abby is so good at reading Tony. I love Kate with the BE NICE look...lol...Poor Tony he is going to burn out and is only holding on until the other's aren't around for his melt down. He is drowning but not in water of that river this time but in Guilt and not knowing who is after him. Who would do these things to get him. I'd like to know too and if I were Kate I'd shake Gibbs and tell him Tony is right that he didn't make them get hurt, it's whoever is trying to hurt him. They have to find this guy before things get worse. Tony can hardly breathe, Ducky is hardly awake, Abby is shot, the rest of the team is healing from their injuries but their heads are spinning from Gibb's reaction to Tony...this was so good, can't wait for another chapter. Sue |
sorgina13 chapter 12 . 10/13/2008 Argh! |