Wow, exciting chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one!

Thank goodness for Jun! Man, what a great chapter! I'm so glad Zuko is still "here." I suspected he was, but to know for sure is wonderful!

I love the reference to Zuko's Tale when he lit the streetlamps, very sweet.

Wow, you are such an incredibly talented writer. Great chapter!

I love the Taang chapters!

Wow, great chapter! I was surprised by the leader of the pirates!

I am consistently impressed by the quality of your writing, very well done.

Man, what an exciting chapter! I love this story so much!

I love it! Also... why do they have to run into trouble wherever they go?!

Oh man, I cracked up reading the explanation of the chapter title! And I'm excited to read about the pirates :)

I have to admit, I'm a little frustrated with their almost-kisses being interrupted! But very good chapter nevertheless. And Appa and the honey, haha! I love how you tie in events from the show into your story.

I love chapters that take time to reflect on how other characters (like Hakoda) feel about what's happening. And bless Aang's heart!

Wow, once again blown away by your talent! Great transitions, adjectives, everything!

The only thing I didn’t like in this sorry is how you focused the relationship only on Zutara the entire time even though it has Taang in the storyline as well and was barely in it.

Did not see that coming! Wow. Truly terrific writing. I especially liked how you associated different alcohols with the individual cultures. It definitely added an element of realism.