Reviews for Fall of the White Lotus
iNactivEaccouNt8324 chapter 31 . 6/27/2020
Wow, exciting chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one!
iNactivEaccouNt8324 chapter 30 . 6/27/2020
Thank goodness for Jun! Man, what a great chapter! I'm so glad Zuko is still "here." I suspected he was, but to know for sure is wonderful!
iNactivEaccouNt8324 chapter 29 . 6/27/2020
I love the reference to Zuko's Tale when he lit the streetlamps, very sweet.
iNactivEaccouNt8324 chapter 28 . 6/27/2020
Wow, you are such an incredibly talented writer. Great chapter!
Anonymous chapter 27 . 6/19/2020
I love the Taang chapters!
Anonymous chapter 26 . 6/19/2020
Wow, great chapter! I was surprised by the leader of the pirates!
Anonymous chapter 25 . 6/19/2020
I am consistently impressed by the quality of your writing, very well done.
Anonymous chapter 24 . 6/19/2020
Man, what an exciting chapter! I love this story so much!
Anonymous chapter 23 . 6/15/2020
I love it! Also... why do they have to run into trouble wherever they go?!
Anonymous chapter 22 . 6/15/2020
Oh man, I cracked up reading the explanation of the chapter title! And I'm excited to read about the pirates :)
Anonymous chapter 21 . 6/15/2020
I have to admit, I'm a little frustrated with their almost-kisses being interrupted! But very good chapter nevertheless. And Appa and the honey, haha! I love how you tie in events from the show into your story.
Anonymous chapter 20 . 6/15/2020
I love chapters that take time to reflect on how other characters (like Hakoda) feel about what's happening. And bless Aang's heart!
Anonymous chapter 19 . 6/15/2020
Wow, once again blown away by your talent! Great transitions, adjectives, everything!
Guest chapter 24 . 6/11/2020
The only thing I didn’t like in this sorry is how you focused the relationship only on Zutara the entire time even though it has Taang in the storyline as well and was barely in it.
zizzic797 chapter 23 . 6/3/2020
Did not see that coming! Wow. Truly terrific writing. I especially liked how you associated different alcohols with the individual cultures. It definitely added an element of realism.
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