|Reviews for Innocence|
| fischstaebchen chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
wow... great job, thank you
| XxKuro-kunxX chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
| ScOut4It chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Wow. I wish I would have found my Alice in school...Beautifully written!
| MY SEXY TEDDY BEAR chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
wow wow its wow i loved it
| Turn.Me.On chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
A great read. I love the atmosphere and emotion behind it. How they both watched each other from afar for the most part. :)
| KracivaVnutri chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
This story really effected me. It really hit home! I was in love with a girl once. She was perfect, things played out exactly like this. We had a bit more contact then Bella and Alice did in this story in the beggining but still it comes so close. Although, sadly I never got my happy ending. Its been years but I still think about her and I wonder if she still thinks about me. This story made me cry because it was almost like a chapter of my life. This girl was on an opposing soccer team but we spent a lot of time together but didn't really know each other. This was kind of painful to read because it reminded me so much of our relationship but I read it and I love it. I only wish my story had ended the same way.
| Miss-Anonymous123 chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
You should make more chapters, this is really. :)
| Marijee chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Enjoyed your story. Loved the build up of Bella's obsession with Alice. Very nice.
| MobiusVariant chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
I just happened to stumble across this story, and I must say that I found it to be a really enjoyable read. I think that you did a very good job conveying the emotion and atmosphere between Bella and Alice. The only thing that I can add is that I would have enjoyed finding out more about Alice's background, what was behind the isolation that she'd built around herself, and what it was that enabled Bella to break through. Again, I enjoyed reading your story, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
| rabastan04 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
wow. :) i usually don't like AU fics that much but this one is just so beautiful. thank you so much for sharing it. and please keep writing more belice fics. :D
| Milalencar chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Like poetry... Beautiful!
| takkygirl chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I LUV THIS STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE!
| FaBAMF chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
o that was like so good. so well written, and you get right int the moment.
what were her responcibilies?
| Voldemort Perfumes chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
This is beautiful, and the language you use just makes it all that more sublime. Sweet stuff, not crass. It is perfect, in layman's terms. I love it.
| neniainas chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I loved the contrast between Alice and Bella and their roles when they were in public and private. In public Alice was clearly more powerfull and outgoing but when they got into their own little world, it was Bella who took control. It was really sweet and romantic, but still not all fluff of lust, there was a plot there. Good job!