Reviews for Innocence
neniainas chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I loved the contrast between Alice and Bella and their roles when they were in public and private. In public Alice was clearly more powerfull and outgoing but when they got into their own little world, it was Bella who took control. It was really sweet and romantic, but still not all fluff of lust, there was a plot there. Good job!
swanqueen chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
just absolutely lovely! and you writing is beautiful, i could read this story forever! thanks for sharing
Blaze chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
EXCELLENT! 100% A 5/5 stars just purely excellent! you have outdone yourself with this magnificent writing (:
moose-of-god chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Wow that was amazing! It was...wow
ShiroFlake chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
I love this. XD Very beautiful.
cuteshortie190 chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
aww i like it
Yur-Fluffyness chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
*sniff* This story was beautiful.
Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
OMG! i loved that little story! so sweet and perfect like Alice! another amazing Bellice fic from you! i hope you never stop writing them )
Unknown-Eth chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
best AlicexBella smexx so far! loved it
Issacharr2 chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
i really enjoyed this story. ]
Mariea1 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
That was well written and really sweet.
Alexawynters chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
its cute kinda seeing alice that vulnerable i just cant help but go 'aww!' lol. i loved this. you could/should write a second chapter to this please and thank you
edwrdsvampiregrl chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
aw...most of it was hot and heavy and all that, but the ending was so sweet!
Shannon chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
I loved this. It is so innocent and for some reason almost makes the idea of Alice and Bella seem right. Well, at least their characters in this story :) You did a fantastic job. It's just a shame that it's only a one-shot!
Lipsmacked chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
very sexy... i love how Alice's personality hooked Bella from afar. Very well done. CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!
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