|Reviews for Innocence|
| Goo82 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
This was good.. tastefully done.
Is this going to be a story then?
| sanglin chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Wow! You packed some intense emotions in this one shot. It was very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I think you should make it longer!
| AutumnDreamer chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Aw! Hot and sweet! Well done!
| CathyD chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Nicely done! I'm not a Bella/Alice shipper at all, but really enjoyed this fic. Excellent writing, it was hot, and sweet. Gonna have to rec this to my friend who *is* a B/A shipper too, she'll love it. :D
| JenRar chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Damn, that was hot! I want more. LOL Seriously. :D
| Noelle26 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
That was so amazing! Great job :D
| Xo.Simply.Jasmine.oX chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
That was really sweet:) At first I wasn't sure if I would like it, not because I am against homosexuality, but because I am really ExB, I wasn't sure how I would react to a seious fic about AxB, but I was amazed by yours, yu really captured the emotion of Alice and Bella:)
Is it finished? or are you going to write more?
| Sporkedd chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
*is having trouble forming coherent words*
i loved this. write more :D
| LeechLover85 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Hot damn Iz. I'm going to have to take that out on Rach
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
That was really pretty. I'm not normally a fan of B/A pairings, because I see too much as sisters. But this was extremely well-done.
| geekgirlhope chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Soo you wrote this for me. I am truly truly honored and enamored. For girl on girl it was perfect.
Your words call to me, make me feel, make me want.
I loved it, more than anything else you have ever written.
| u2ugly2nv chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Sounds like a good story. keep going