|Reviews for My Lump|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I LOVED it! I like them together.
| Karokibathephangirl chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
You should do a longer story! This is awesome! A longer one would be interesting. I'm just curious to know what Zahir's family would think! They most definitely probably wouldn't approve of his decision to marry Kel!
| Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
I enjoyed reading this fic
| Fire Daughter chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
This was really cute. I read it awhile ago and thought I should read it again, it was so cute.
| Emily chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
While this does not fit with the series, it is certainly very good, and Zahir did grow up a little bit as the years went on.
And you're right, the title does sound very weird. Like a battle scar, or... something...
| MissMisfit585 chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I actually quite liked this.
I must say, I do absolutely adore Zahir / Kel and they would have to be one of my favourite pairings, but I can't find very many of them... Any chance you could suggest a few good ones?
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
I like it. You make an interesting character out of Zahir. If you're still planning on writing more of it, I'd suggest adding more detail so its less of a narrative and we can get into his head more: see his side of their interactions in the canon.
| Lotti's Lot chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
good job, i really liked, that, yesh the middle does need a little work but other then that it was really good.
| Baby Fawn chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
this would be a great story with more chapters going in it i love the combo also. I think they make a great duo they are made for each other. dont mean to tell you how to write. just thought it would be neat to have more of them in this story
| writeaway03 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
I look forward to the second part.
| SabbyRinaBanina chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
omg i love this pairing 2!
I wouldn't continue this one, but i think you could definitly start a new story with this same vauge plot line, but make it into a longer and more detailed/invloved story. It has a lot of room for you to move. Just an idea )
love it love it love it!
| Victoria Taylor chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
I love this one shot. You're right. There aren't a lot of Kel/Zahir. I kinda like them together as well. I'm for all kinds of pairings with Kel. It's always interesting with her.
| Magna Parva chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Not bad, dude. I'm a huge K/Z fan too, and I must say, my absolute favourite piece is soccerchick08's 'Among The Bazhir'. I wouldn't mind seeing the ending to that!
| Ally-Marty chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Aw. That was very nice. I'm not much of a Kel/Zahir fan, but you write so well, you made me like it! :)
| Tortall101 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
I enjoyed this and i would like to read a second part ;D