|Reviews for In My Place|
| tatewaki2000 chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
It was a very nice story, regardless of its draft-like state.
Mm. When I get some free time, I'll be sure to look at your other stories. All of 'em look enticing.
| tatewaki2000 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
I liek this story.
| Stiehl chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
Well, it was an interesting idea, at least... I like the version where they try to transform into each other better, personally. You definitely want something along those lines. You should have Naruto explain to Sakura about Kyuubi, as he wouldn't want Sakura to have to face "it" unprepared, not to mention she's already curious why everyone seems to hate Naruto. As for the rest, it's a bit obvious. They'll try to figure out how to get back into their original bodies, as well as how it happened in the first place. Maybe have them go on a few missions in the other's body, while still attempting to get a handle on how to work the unfamiliar physique. Whether you want to have a more central plot, or just have them switch back after learning some moral lesson is up to you.
Good luck, and peace.
| Aceina chapter 2 . 11/27/2008
i sugest u go with both a mix and match of the two leav ino deeply conufsed for awhile have hinata find out about the swich form her normal spying thens tarts to stalk naruto in sakuras body have sasuke eb verry cofnsued on whats goigno n DONT have kakashi figure it out (do to his lazyness)
have sasuke stalk sakruas body (which ahs naruto in it) bump into hinata asks her whys he is spyign on sakura sayign osmehtignk like i thout u liked the idiot
she rpelsy with somethign like "i um changed my mind" confusing sasuke further adventuwally ino spys as well tyrign to fignure things out cus every 1 has gone crazy as far as she is concerned and some how falls in lvoe with sakura in narutos body
so ure match up would be sakura ino but with sakura in narutos body for that half ot he match up
and then hinata gets naruto to flal in love with her (naruto insakruas body of course)so u have naruto x hinata but withte body of sakura x hinata
and sasuke gets no 1 and remains clueless
| Aceina chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
hahahahha good fic cant wait to read the rest
| Hyrulian Hero Akai chapter 2 . 11/23/2008
Dont scrap this fic! Its freaking hilarious! I so wanna read more!
| uzukun7 chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
i dont understand how you dont have direction with either of the 2 alternatives since they both are driving to the main goal of naruto and sakura understanding each other lot better, so from that standpoint this story is definitely a narusaku. i really hope you reconsider dumping this story since i think it has a lot of potential. in either case please give it a try. laterz
| dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
wow i like it i've wanted to read a story like this with all the body switching stories out there its about time someone came up with a naru/saku one. i think it will be interesting for sakura to meet naruto's "tenant" it would be about time for her to get an idea of what he goes thru with that sadistic fox inside his body. i liked the silent glares part very acurate i like stories that are close to the original but different. maybe even throw in some dealings with the pervy sage as well. is this going to be pre or post chunin exams? godaime or sandaime as hokage? how long do you want to leave them in each others bodies? maybe make it a lesson for each mostly sakura or a method for anruto to gain some sympathy from the other genin. this is probably the most unconventional way for two people to get together but it can be fun. i'm a well spring of ideas so if you need some help getting past writers block hit me up ill be glad to help.
| Gravenimage chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
Great story this is the perfect for Sakura to see how hard Naruto'slife is as the container of the Kyubi please update soon.
| Koneko-Haru-chan chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Hahahahahahahahaha they are so freaked out right now!
| kyubi 666 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
wow! that brilliant, this idea this good please continues him this brilliant one!
I wonder that it passed in the following one I surrender.
| YojimboJango chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Looks like a pretty good premise. I'll keep an eye on this one.
I've read a few of these, but most of the time Naruto keeps his naturally insane chakra levels. It might be fun to see him crash from not having an unending energy supply.
It might also be fun to see how inner Sakura reacts to being bathed in Naruto's high energy.
| Tatsu-ZZmage chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Oh god a freaky friday story. hahahahahah i don't think i've seen one of these any where on the naruto section. well done. awesome.
| Namikaze777 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
This is pretty interesting. Please continue
| uzukun7 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
i rewally like the way this story has started off. i cant wait for them to see each other and see what their reactions to one another is going to be like. and finally i cant wait to see how sakura feels when people start treating her like crap because of who she is now. one question, does sakura now have the fox inside of her in narutos body? i cant wait for the next chapter. laterz