Reviews for My Four Kings - Classic
MissWitch250 chapter 18 . 1/31
Luna! Oh my gosh YAY! This is getting so exciting!
MissWitch250 chapter 9 . 1/31
First-of-all, I would like to say that this is probably the manliest Sailor Moon fanfiction in existence.
I would also like to say that at first I was really bothered by Mamoru's absent-mindedness, but now that I've read further, it's starting to make sense and I like it.
I really hope that this story is headed in a direction that has the Senshi working in the bar, but I guess I'll just have to read on and see. I'm so excited!
MissWitch250 chapter 6 . 1/31
Love it, love everything about it, and I love that you brought attention to the SHIT in Shitennou. I can't wait till the girls come in (I love Jupiter and Mercury, and Nephrite and Zoisite are hilarious).
MissWitch250 chapter 2 . 1/31
This is by-far the most entertaining story that has shown the relationship that the Shitennou have! I love the dick/gay jokes and insults that are thrown so casually at each other, and you can tell there's an underlying friendship :) I absolutely can't wait to continue with this story
Llavender chapter 2 . 1/31
This is hilarious! You make them feel so real, so alive!
leneypoo chapter 35 . 9/27/2014
I saw your post about this story in tumblr and I figured why not give it a shot. I was kinda skeptical at first, but the moment when "William Shatner" spoke and Zoicite's reaction to it sold me. I almost died laughing. I had to read the rest.
coldblossom chapter 35 . 5/27/2014
I just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading this. I think I've been following it since like, 2008 or something? Jeebus, that's a long time, but this story is awesome and so its worth it. Just don't go GRR Martin on me or anything and only update every 7 years. I've been having anxiety issues and going back and re-reading the hilarity and drama that is this fic has helped a lot. I look forward to your next update, whenever you get to it. Keep on keepin' on.
huangjj chapter 35 . 12/8/2013
Whaaa...! That was so intense! What happens next?

The timey-wimeyness of it all is awesome. I thought it was the past but then it's the future or is it an alternate timeline? And Rei, always the survivor! Ugh. I like where you're going with this.
huangjj chapter 30 . 12/7/2013
["That's a pretty god damned big bridge." Jadeite murmured.]

["What?" Mina asked. She was known to mangle aphorisms on occasion, but this man's odd manner of dress and even odder sense of poetry stunned her.]

HAHAHA! These lines made me laugh! Love how you are still getting the humour in there during this seriously intense situation they're in. It's so awesome how this fic started as crack!fic and became this engrossing mystery. The scene with Usagi and the creepy she-devil was scary! I've rarely found that in fic before, it's awesome. :)

Soooo I finally started reading this after I'd put it off for ages since it wasn't finished, and now I'm only five chapters from the end of what's written so far... and a whole year since the last update... Ahh! Please write more, is ultimately the point of this message. This story is too good!
Guest chapter 35 . 6/25/2013
So... We've got a bunch of senshi running around with no recollection of actually being senshi. Uranus and Neptune threatening Zoicite. Kunzite, aka Eros Nephrite, Jadeite, and an Endymion dog throwing into some other time watching how Kunzite (
Ms. Fairweather chapter 35 . 4/8/2013
Holy crap. I just found this story and read the entire thing. I started reading and just couldn't stop. And now I am facing a horrible cliffhanger! I really hope you update sometime soon, cause holy cow
Through Darkness chapter 35 . 2/6/2013
This is phenomenal. It started as a cracky crazy madness kind of thing that I figured I'd read for a quick laugh and it developed into this intense emotional roller coaster that I was rushing back to read. You've done an amazing job with character development - taking the personality traits you gave them and turning them into coping mechanisms, Kunzite being possessed by the spirit of the Moonlight Knight which I assume has been somehow separated from Mamoru's personality along with the Golden Crystal separation - just WOAH. Total awesomeness and I hope you update.
inori chapter 17 . 12/31/2012
i love the focus on makoXneph but the ending...OMG! what the hell happened to Lita?! haha

all of the characters (except the 4 Generals) are warped...haha
Radioactive Rubber Duck chapter 35 . 12/30/2012
Wow, shit, keep writing, seriously. Not even kidding, this is like the only fic I'm actually reading anymore
emrei chapter 35 . 12/30/2012
Wow, this story is really great. I'm glad I didn't let go.
To be honest, the first couple of chapters seemed pointless (you warned us), so I jumped ahead to the last chapter, was so intrigued that I decided to push through. I'm sooo glad I did.

What you've come up with is a Shittenou-centric, based-on-manga, modern day Sailormoon fic, where the girls are accomplished individuals who are completely unaware of thier history, with msytery as to how this happened. There's romance but it's not the main focus, and you are developing each individual, and each relationship they have with each person, while maintaining who they are. You've incorporated SM canon, Greek mythology, without emphasizing too much on it, and keeping it grounded. Plus the whole "old lives destroyed, they're reborn, and Motoki's still around" was good in my books. :)

And although it started out as crack-fic, and maybe you didn't know where you were going, but the slow build up is nice, and natural. So brava. I cannot wait to read this to completion.

I were to concrit anything it would be go back and tighten it up the earlier chapters. I can't recall if it was the AN or something Luna said, but I was given the impression that this took place after the battle with Metallia, but now in later chapters, it's after the battle with Galaxia.

Cuz now, after chapter 35, Luna said they couldn't find the girls' bodies after the battle with Metallia, but here they are with the outer senshi, and Mamoru dying.

Maybe I missed something?

Either way, excellent job! While I wait for you to update, were there any stories that inspired this?
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