Reviews for The Slip
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
What the hell?! Her slowness here was ridiculous!
Tangible Orange Potato Muffin chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
This was wonderful. Ryoma had an attitude in this, I liked it (:
Jerui chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
cool. i just realized this was sakuno's version. haha. i'm so slow. good one shot though. :)
bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
i really liked this. been looking for it for a while. i don't generally enjoy reading 'slow Sakuno' stories but this was funny. thanks for the read.
Raine Haruto chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
lol.. sakunooooo~~ so slow XD
humanbeing-san chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
uhmm..i understand this better - much better - than the companion piece.

anyways,it was good.
Efigeneia chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
This is my first time to submit a review, though I've been reading fanfictions for so long already. I found your story really great. One of the best RyoSaku's ever. The story is quite good, and also there are no grammar mistakes unlike other RyoSaku fanfictions. I would love to read more of your stories, but I kinda wish there are more detailed romantic scenes in the story. Yes, I'm obviously a fan of the pairing. There. So, keep up the nice work and goodluck with your other fanfics!
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Nice story!
LunaxXmoongoddessXx chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
awe that was awesome... it was of the chain dude... i like.
Carlalalita chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
Nicely done, I like the round-about way you built Sakuno's revelation.
steph chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
it was wow thats all i have to say

Miyo-chan02 chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
omg! *speechless*


I love it
harunomasu chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
So cute~! The clueless Sakuno and Ryoma look-a-like xD

Love that look-a-like. So realistic :D
Snowing Night chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Cute! Cute! Cute!

I'm squealing die hard here.]
anne1130 chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
this is really humurous..

sakuno not believing that ryoma is really with her until the end is entertaining..

its a nice fanfiction

keep it up

i'm looking forward to your other works...
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