Reviews for Recalculating Trajectories
piratechicka chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Ah, I loved this! You presented everyone's maddness and personalities greatly! Everyone seemed to be in character and the flow of craziness transitioned well! Bravo!
GuesssWho chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Very good story.
Lauralot chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
There is nothing, nothing I enjoy more than a fic with all the rogues in one place. Especially when they're so well-written. That was extremely entertaining. Thank you!
prin69 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
aww, harvey! the poor guy
Peacockgirl chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
This is hysterical, and well written as well. I love it! I thought it was great how the set-up was very realistic with Crane & the fear toxin, and then once all the villains started showing up it just degenerated into chaos. Very, very amusing.
PineappleGrenade chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
This is brilliant, I loved it. O All my favourite Batman villains all getting together, what more could anyone ask for? I loved how they all just kept showing up one after another.

You write really well, with a good mixture of seriousness and humour. One of my favourite lines was the one about everyone with a 'grudge and a sewing machine', that made me lol. XP
SaJi chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
kek. I'm a sucker for character pieces. Very nicely done me thought.

A few corrections

- Archem

*points* Arkham

- peering out at him from the eye wholes of his mask.

*points* 'wholes' should be 'holes'.

- while a roe of test tubes

&

- To his left lay roe upon roe of wooden boxes,

*points* 'roe' should be 'row'.

- working with in a month if

*points* 'with in' should be one word.

- halls of Archem Asylum by mistake.

*points* 'Archem' should be 'Arkham'.

- Edward Nygma. Pleasure to meet you.”

*points* For the ' " ' before Edward.

- locked up in Archem under the heaviest security

&

- to leave Archem without offering to take me along.

*points* Arkham

- and he through the woman

*points* 'through' should be 'threw'.