|Reviews for Recalculating Trajectories|
| piratechicka chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Ah, I loved this! You presented everyone's maddness and personalities greatly! Everyone seemed to be in character and the flow of craziness transitioned well! Bravo!
| GuesssWho chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Very good story.
| Lauralot chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
There is nothing, nothing I enjoy more than a fic with all the rogues in one place. Especially when they're so well-written. That was extremely entertaining. Thank you!
| prin69 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
aww, harvey! the poor guy
| Peacockgirl chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
This is hysterical, and well written as well. I love it! I thought it was great how the set-up was very realistic with Crane & the fear toxin, and then once all the villains started showing up it just degenerated into chaos. Very, very amusing.
| PineappleGrenade chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
This is brilliant, I loved it. O All my favourite Batman villains all getting together, what more could anyone ask for? I loved how they all just kept showing up one after another.
You write really well, with a good mixture of seriousness and humour. One of my favourite lines was the one about everyone with a 'grudge and a sewing machine', that made me lol. XP
| SaJi chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
kek. I'm a sucker for character pieces. Very nicely done me thought.
A few corrections
- peering out at him from the eye wholes of his mask.
*points* 'wholes' should be 'holes'.
- while a roe of test tubes
- To his left lay roe upon roe of wooden boxes,
*points* 'roe' should be 'row'.
- working with in a month if
*points* 'with in' should be one word.
- halls of Archem Asylum by mistake.
*points* 'Archem' should be 'Arkham'.
- Edward Nygma. Pleasure to meet you.”
*points* For the ' " ' before Edward.
- locked up in Archem under the heaviest security
- to leave Archem without offering to take me along.
- and he through the woman
*points* 'through' should be 'threw'.