Reviews for United We Stand
collinsgeorgia chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Really loved this story, i hope you dont mind it inspired a story of my own. it mentions shane lending claire clothes and them being in his room after the feast of fools. I will give you credit for the idea in the summary! awsome story, one for my favourites! x
RockPaperRuby chapter 2 . 4/9/2011
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING! i want more... MORE! :) luv ur style
claire chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
it was brillant
Flying Penguinz chapter 2 . 5/12/2010
That's so awesome! I love it!
dancers of the night chapter 2 . 5/4/2010
This is really good. update soon.
In Warm Blood chapter 2 . 10/10/2009
First of all, watch how you're making your characters talk to each other. No teenager I know talks in the ridiculously adult sounding sentences you're writing. Also, reread your story, and for God's sake, make sure that the way you write things are physically possible. For example, "... ushering Michael in as Claire slipped out to change." Okay, let's just look at that part. Michael, Eve, and Shane are in the room. Claire has just left. "Michael looked from Shane to Claire, in Shane's clothes, and back to Shane again. He gave Shane a very skeptical look; Shane just held his hands up and shook his head as if to say 'No man you got it all wrong - nothing happened'." Wait, wait, wait. Michael is looking at Claire, who is no longer in the room? Are you trying to make Michael into a peeping tom? I'd like to believe it was simply a "not-rereading-your-story" kind of mistake. Also, if you're continuing your story from Claire's point of view, she should be by herself, maybe thinking about what's going to happen to her friends. She's not in the room, but she knows what is happening?

Other than that, I think that you did a good job keeping Shane, Michael, Eve, and Claire in character.
gabscalde chapter 2 . 3/2/2009
i really like this please keep writing, you have something good going...
xxxxcrazychickxxxx chapter 2 . 2/8/2009
good job!:D
jane.e.luv chapter 2 . 1/29/2009
Aw...I love it!

Shane and Claire are so cute together!

nice work

cheers :)

janee
leah chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
good good good good... write more! hehe!
DreamCatching chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
I love this. Please continue soon! :)
fijdkngalflsijdkgn chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
YOU NEED TO CONTINUE.

Please?

That was really god. :]
xXx Amy Scott Luvs DA's xXx chapter 2 . 12/30/2008
DONT DIE!

-sniffle-

Shane and Michael are so hot!

I love them.

Claire and Eve... amazing!

UPDATE SOON!

Amelia Cullen
The Awsome Threesome chapter 2 . 12/30/2008
or epleas oh more!
Abstract Wonder chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
This is good! I like the interaction between the four of them-especially Shane and Claire.

One can never get enough of Shane and Claire.
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