|Reviews for Constellations|
| AAJL chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
GODDAMN IT STOP MAKING ME CRY!
Your stories are so emotional (in a good way, of course :) ), they make me cry every time.
ESPECIALLY this first chapter with Iris and Dahlia DX
Iris must have VERY small handwriting if she can fit such long wishes inside the strips of paper stars XP
It must have taken her a long time to fill up a jar full of paper stars :D
| Felly D chapter 3 . 5/25/2009
I like how you form Maya's character here. She's really cute and funny :D
I like Elffie
| Smart Aleckette chapter 4 . 3/24/2009
I'm so sorry it took me so long to review! I got the alert when FF was down, and then I kept forgetting. . . yeah. :(
Anyway, I remember that nursery rhyme! (I used to say it all the time when I was a kid. XD) And I really liked this one, especially the part about science telling Ema to think, but Lana telling her to believe. Plus, I didn't find anything weird about your grammar in this because of the present tense.
. . . But I suck at present tense myself (it confuses me when I read it a lot, I'm that dense, and I couldn't write it decently to save my life), so you may wish to ignore that particular opinion. XDD
| Rosary chapter 4 . 3/6/2009
Another sister-thing is Morgan Fey and Misty Fey. Which is actually quite sad, too.
| koalasandicedtea chapter 4 . 2/21/2009
whoa! this is awesome :)
as usual, a great new chapter
| crderf chapter 4 . 2/21/2009
Awesome job on the previous chapters and this one. I really like the Mia and Maya, and the Lana and Ema sister stories. Update soon!
| Rosary chapter 3 . 1/18/2009
I know of another pair of sisters..
But it's from one of the cases that doesn't leave much of an imprint..
Ini and Mimi Miney :P
(I actually like them XDD)
And I like your story, especially how it frames the characters nicely.
| Smart Aleckette chapter 3 . 12/27/2008
This was so sweet. I've always wondered how Mia dealt with Misty's disappearance right after it had happened, and you did a pretty good job of writing it.
I especially love how you protrayed Mia's and Maya's relationship. We never see it as often as we should in the games, because Maya is either chanelling Mia and can't communicate with her, or Pearl is chanelling Maya while Maya is either chanelling another spirit/kidnapped/being charged for murder. Capcom tends to do this a lot, don't they? Then again, that makes the fanfiction writers' job more fun. . .
As for your concerns that the other chapters dragged on, I didn't find that to be the case. -nods-
I wonder; will you be doing one of Mimi and Ini Miney any time soon? I was playing that case today, actually. The idea has great potential, methinks. (. . . And now I just got a great plot idea. 8D)
Update soon? Please?
| Smart Aleckette chapter 2 . 12/27/2008
I consider Gant one of those characters you love to hate. Like Dahlia. XD He's kind of awesome in his insane evilness.
I didn't find the ending too angsty. Then again, I love angst, so that kinda affects my opinion. XDD I like what you had at the end of each section. It kind of puts emphasis on what you just read, making it a nice touch. I still love the Dahlia and Iris one-shot the best so far, though. -nods-
| Smart Aleckette chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
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Holy crap. This was so beautiful. There were no mistakes that I could see, and the letters made me tear up a little bit. I've always thought that Dahlia and Iris must have been extremely close before Iris was left with Bikini. But something must have happened to Dahlia before that point, because it was she who convinced her father to drop off Iris at Hazakura Temple. I think. I haven't played that case for a couple of months. I'm glad to see that someone else out there agrees. -nods-
I really loved the ending. How it was like the younger, not-evil Dahlia was telling Iris to let it go. 8D Thank you so much for writing this.
-goes on to read the next three chapters-
| Scrawlers chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Aw, this is really sweet! The only thing that bugged me, though, is that Dahlia was continuously called Iris' older sister - and if she is, then it could only be by a few minutes, since they're twins and all. It's only a tiny detail, but it irked me a little bit each time I read "big" or "older" - since, to me, a minute or two isn't that big of a difference.
Either way, it was still sweet, and I love the paper star idea. :)
| Cutiecat chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
I cried when I read this 'cuz it was so sad! I always thought Dahlia was just using everyone around her, but when I think of the possibility of her being a nice big sister, like you wrote at the beginning, I feel sad that she changed. It also reminds me of my brother and me because we used to be really close friends, but then he just started using me. (I liked to pretend to be a waitress and he would make me serve all his friends. at first it was fun, but then it was like I was his slave. now i'm not like his slave; we just don't talk or spend time together so I don't really know if that would be considered an improvement, but, just like Iris, I still miss the old him and love him)
| January51023 chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
that's lovely, i like the impressions about the way Iris and Dahlia were at first so similar, but then they sort of...grew apart if you know what i mean.
i presume that as well as Ema and Lana you'll do a Maya and Mia?
| koalasandicedtea chapter 2 . 10/19/2008
YES I LOVED THIS ONE TOO
please allow me to continue assisting you in this cute series!
| LazyLaze chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Wow...this was really, really sad...but you did a great job! The little letters were heartbreaking, and I thought you captured Iris' personality perfectly. Please, please update with another chapter soon!