Reviews for Dreaming
xxSpreadYourWingsxx chapter 1 . 8/3/2009

*more tears* amazing!

xx Denise
x-xMasqueradeAngelx-x chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Oh my gosh, I havent actually read the twilight series as of yet, though I have read the synopsis for them and this is truly awesome! I loved it, though there are three ever so slight errors, “Bella don’t say is all about risks and it requires you to jump." you need "it's" instead of "is". "is going to waiting for you to jump for them" should be "wait," thats it :) sorry if it had already been mentioned, but was so good otherwise! well done :) x
LiveLifeLikeNeverBefore chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
aw that was so sad but sweet at the same time!

Luv from a Mutt.
hinata-37 chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
"Okay so I know that this isn’t as good as I hoped it would be..."

are you crazy! this was so frigging good! I loved it! the way you wrote Bella sadness, Edward being despert you brought tears to my eyes! this was really good...and I'mdead serious.. I really loved and I can't believe this is your first Twilight story...the way you make them talk is actually like you knew them more than anybody!

So bravo Aly! it was flawless! going to my favorite! can't wait to see your next story on Twilight! keep on going sweetie!

Love ya

-Your Nelly
Gregoris chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Question here...will sound lame I'm sorry...but are you Stephanie Meyer? The way you write is just like hers! You're like a pro at Bella's thoughts. (i know your not really her, just saying lmao) good job load soon
Random chapter 1 . 9/29/2008

but i gotta say, i did cry while reading this. When you read what actually happened in the second book and then this, you feel sad because you know Bella was going through a sad time...WRITE ANOTHER TWILIGHT STORY NOW! I COMMAND YOU
RedRose48 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
um all i can say is WOW just WOW
redrose48 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
um all i can say is WOW just WOW