Reviews for Blind Beauty
jk chapter 3 . 10/23/2016
They tell her she did a good job and she shyly whispers her name...for no fucking reason! No on asked your name you stupid fucking cunt!
You wanna have a competition? Cause I'm soooo fucking humble
jk chapter 2 . 10/23/2016
If Bella can't see how does she know she looks like scar from the lion king?
Wtf is there a dog POV?
Why was Bella feeling around in the seat and was like..oh there you are! Is her great Dane so small that he gets lost in seats?
When Bella said she had music why did Alice say " wow"? Is it unusual for people to be in music class? Is Bella sooooo amazing cause she got into a elective class? Lol
You do realize how fucking stupid your story is right? It reads like it was written by a child
Laura chapter 23 . 9/26/2016
What is the sequel called
aliciaalexander2015 chapter 23 . 7/19/2016
I going to read the sequel
Lillian Marie Hope chapter 23 . 5/18/2016
Please write more. I really want to find out what happens.
Unknownfic chapter 4 . 11/6/2015
I'm really loving this so far! one of my favorite characters so far is Goliath, I love how he helps Bella with everything and even on some level understands what she is saying or asking and even responds, one smart dog :D
Guest chapter 23 . 10/31/2015
Uh... Ahhhhhh! Please update,
claty chapter 12 . 7/13/2015
I love this story! I like that Edward wants Carlisle to try to get Bella's vision back.
tiffywiffyfluffykitty chapter 7 . 1/28/2015
I like Goliath, he's a great character. But the fanfiction... I'm sorry, but I can't continue reading this. Too much of it is just... no, just no. But the idea isn't bad!
khris91 chapter 23 . 8/16/2014
cant wait for more and i enjoy the store
TheBlindMusician chapter 23 . 8/11/2014

I read your story. Actually, I have read it before, but just found it again. I LOVE it!

There are a few things that could be described more. As a blind person, the blind use their other senses, since the sight does not work.

I should know. See, I am blind.

I too, have written a story about a blind girl who eventually falls in love with Edward. (sorry, i hate bella)
You can check it out, (along with my other stories), by clicking on my username. It is called, "Blind Beauty"
and has 13 chapters, as of now.

I'll continue it, once I get around to writing more.

If you do read it, have fun and please review.

Great story! Keep it up.
ForgothePassword chapter 8 . 8/1/2014
that was a
Does she have her glasses now? Or will everyone see it?
If I had a scar on my eye I would show it, because it wouldn't be a fear or secret. But I understand why they do it.
ForgothePassword chapter 5 . 8/1/2014
Yeah, I've got a blind friend, there are so many bastards in the world who think being blind makes you any different then them. When in fact you're smarter than them
ForgothePassword chapter 4 . 8/1/2014
You made that so funny! I was laughing my head off. You very well do not look at a blind person like that cause they would totally show you up. As for my favorite dog (fictional wise) Goliath is awesome! Love both POVs
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I have no idea how anyone can like this. This is NOT well written, your "writing" basically lacks everything. If you are not talented, please don't try to be a writer. maybe you have nice ideas about what you would want to happen to these characters that you've learned to love while reading the twilight books - or probably in your case while watching the movies, because honestly, if you'd ever read a book, i doubt you would have written this crap and posted it online for everyone to see. I couldn't bring myself to read more than one chapter - thank god it was quite short! i can't believe there's a sequel to this. i hope you're not stupid enough to think this "writing" might be a serious career option for you. get real and please stop trying to write stories, you're NOT good at it!
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