|Reviews for Flame and Metal|
| LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
I read this a long while back and I just found it again and read it once more... I still love this story! X3
| inneko abroad chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
"Do it. I'm watching you." omg so hot. I felt that in my stomach.
| Seraphina Greene chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Okay, let me begin by saying that this is FANTASTIC. It's worth every review it gets, and more. There's only a few minor error's that might move the piece faster for those who are really picky like me.
First, at the paragraph near the beginning, that begins with "Yes, it was a mistake of sorts in Edward Elric's mind. ..." "WORLD" was spelled "WOLRD" and it should be "an arrogant prick," not "a arrogant prick."
At the point where Ed finally gets to see what Roy looks like under his uniform, the extra hard return is unnecessary. It should simply be, "Now...he knew." Then, continue in the same paragraph continue with the next line, "And it was very nice." can be there too. Afterwards, begin with the "Broad shoulders, jutted collarbone, defined torso..."
Other than that, I loved it. It was fabulous. Oh. One final thought. This is, in no way, a EdXRoy. This is a RoyXEd, and that's the way it should be. It's just mislabeled.
Thank you for this beautiful piece and letting me rant a little,
| Sachie chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Lol I love how they still bicker as they do that :) and your note at the end reminds me of kyoko from skip beat...
| Bablet chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
That was amazing!
The moonlight thing at the end, was it a refrence to what I think it was a refrence to?
| rainfall chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
this was beautiful and funny and i loved it a lot a lot a lot!
| Jaye-hunter chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
GREAT STORY! LOVED IT!
| Celeste Rose chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
That was the FUNNIEST sex story ever. I luffed it, by the way.
"Flame Prick." and "pyromaniac." ICREDIBLE
| SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Definately worth selling your soul to the yaoi god to hear "OMG that was HOT", no?
I think it is. And I'd like to tell you...
OH MY GOD, THAT WAS HOT!
| animefangirlNoriko chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
That was... interesting... .;; Plot was borderline forced, but you know? I really don't care. That was good fluff and I've been looking for something like this for a few days.
| JustAnotherCrazyLady chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
That was perhaps THE hottest thing I have ever read. Keep up the good work!
| Kazumi-Uchiha-567 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
...That was fucking awesome more I need more!
| Kokiiru-kun chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
| wolfchik666 chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
that was so good 3 very good w keep up the good work and i hope to see more stories from this pairing soon. ;D ciao!
| AkatsukixXxProdigy chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
O...MY GOD! I friggen love it! it was amazing!