|Reviews for What Happens in Umbridge's Office|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/23
That was such a funny one shot :) I loved the fact that you had a niffler attack the shiny things *giggles* that was so funny!
I think that my favourite bit was "Aiyee he shrieked jumping onto the chair" priceless
oooh and "he couldn't deny that his ears was very attractive"
(Sorry the review is kinda all over the place I wrote as I read it.)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
This is one very believable and convincing story thanks to the perfect portrayal of both characters!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Ahaha! Denial Luna! :P I ship this pairing so hard :D
| E J ect chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
If Draco's robes are gone, what's left? I doubt he's wearing muggle clothing underneath.
| ljpjcg chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This was extremely funny. I adored the way you've written them.
| liltrix chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
I adored this! Very in character.
| xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Opinons? Well, as much as I like Draco and Luna, they are not my favorite characters, so I don't have a very good grasp on what their characters are supposed to be. (I also never read OoTP and the next books so I don't know much of how they would have beheaved here.) BUT. I think you've convinced me with the way you wrote them. This really -to me- that it was Luna through Draco's eyes.
The only thing I regret is that their ...relationship? (I'm not sure what to call what went on here) didn't have more permanence, since this didn't feel like a divergence from the canon, and more like a peek in-between. But that's just the romantic in me talking, anyway.
Your technical writing was pretty good, although at moments it felt a little mindless... but considering that Draco was bored out of his mind and dealing with Luna Lovegood, I think that that style was spot on.
| Dance Elle Dance chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Haha! Oh this was great. A very enjoyable read. I loved what you did with this. Keep up the great work!
| JasonsLea chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I like the pairing of Draco/Luna and this one was brilliant!
| 22Moons chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I literally laughed out loud when Luna was imitating Draco. Really funny (and in character) stuff!
| revolverrevolutions chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
This was SO awesome and cute XD and in character i loooved it! umbridge did something actually useful.
| Miravisu chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
LOL! Yes, that was very Luna and Draco-esque..
| SnowRider14 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Priceless! You rock! The characters seemed in place and I am glad! I liked it.
| elektra30 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Oh I really loved your characterisation of Luna and Draco; spot-on! Loved Luna's matter-of-fact ways that made Draco speechless, and Draco's shriek (rofl) and flirtatiousness towards Luna. Great creativity using the Niffler attack to send some sparks flying! The 'napping niffler' in the lion hat cavity must have been quite a sight. Although I'm not sure why they are able to risk leaving Umbridge's office without getting severely punished :O But nevertheless, humourous and well-written!