Billions of light years would be in another galaxy.

ooh, predalien queen, this is getting real interesting

So far, I like where this story is going, thanks for making a true to the series fanfic and not that romance crap everyone else makes

Ello'

WOW, what a magnificent read... if this ever gets published or epubed for god-sakes please email me the link I will by it immediately!

J

Ti Stvarno Mislis Da Znas o Balkan? Ti Amerikanac Koji verovatno ni ne zna kojim jezikom Pricam? pa ima mnogo toga o balkanu odakle ja dolazim, i mogu da ti kazem da istorija je mnogo mracnija nego sto ces ti ikada znati o Lazaru, milosu brankovicu I ostalim iz te price, Samo Oni U kojim venama tece krv Balkana zna za bol, tajne, mrznje, i patnje Balkana, Jer Balkan Je Srbija... And Serbia is My Country. For I am Serbian and a Very Dark One... I Would Add Now anymore Questions?

you say in here that the nun married the monk but I've got news for you, they didn't do that back then and Catholic religious orders don't do it at all

I'm really enjoying this story! It is very high-quality and very well-written! I'd just wish you would write a part 2. It deserves more reviews!

Nice!

a pity you don't get more reviews ... but nowadays it seems that the A/P community is dominated by fans who have a more "romantic" idea of the predators. Anyway, I gave a shot at a serious AvP story too and since beginning I've realized the difficulty in composing a solid story beyond a certain length and seeing it through to a satisfying conclusion ... I think you're well on your way

well, I wonder what happened to Zaratustra?

I cannot say enough times that this is one of the best aliens/predator stories I have read (and i have read most of the ones on here).

I also have a question.

Do any of the finbacks carry close quarter weapons or is the brute strength of the exoskeleton enough of a weapon on its own?

amazing story!

i really like the idea of pitting exoskeletal armor against the predators and aliens.

i also like the detail you gave about each character and their suit.

any kind of time frame for when the next chapter will be up?