Update more please

exams are important

Please write more please this is pretty good

It's decent. But not spectacular. When you are writing this please remember the old Show Not Tell. The story jumps around a lot and you keep your chapters a little too short. The story would be more engaging if you would add a hook at the end of a chapter. Something like, "suddenly, There was a knock at the door and my heart filled with dread." Or something to add suspense. Nice start.

OMG poor Yakko! I hope things work out.

Sad day!

A tip: DON'T CURSE, IT'S MEAN!

aw poor yakko. but this story is a great idea.

oh...please update! this is a good story so far

Cool chapter. Nice interaction between the siblings.

Keep the good writing.

I have an idea you could use if you want to. My idea is: in chapter 1 they dont live on the Warner lot; Wakko and Dot get taken away; then Yakko takes them away from the home (sorta like kidnapping them but they want to go).

Thats all I've got right now.

Its a good story so far.

Is you get good ideas, update soon

No! No! No! -sobs-

You can't seperate the Warners you bad man from child services! Only Yakko knows how to take care of them!

Ah... continue soon!

omg poor yakko! i hope he gets to keep them!

uh bad spelling but keep it coming

Very good start.

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Keep the good writing.