| Reviews for Yakko's Fight |
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   WildKrattsAnimaiacsFan chapter 3 . 2/2 ME DON'T LIKE YOU. |
| KatherineDarkQueenRiddle666 chapter 3 . 1/1/2013 Update more please |
| kitkatkathy27121993 chapter 2 . 12/9/2012 exams are important |
| Dracodragonheart chapter 3 . 8/16/2012 Please write more please this is pretty good |
| Amy Yocom chapter 3 . 4/11/2012 It's decent. But not spectacular. When you are writing this please remember the old Show Not Tell. The story jumps around a lot and you keep your chapters a little too short. The story would be more engaging if you would add a hook at the end of a chapter. Something like, "suddenly, There was a knock at the door and my heart filled with dread." Or something to add suspense. Nice start. |
| KaylaMicael chapter 3 . 2/18/2012 OMG poor Yakko! I hope things work out. |
| Ritsu Kaiori chapter 2 . 1/20/2010 Sad day! |
| tothearkNULL chapter 2 . 8/5/2009 A tip: DON'T CURSE, IT'S MEAN! |
| longgnol chapter 2 . 7/23/2009 aw poor yakko. but this story is a great idea. |
| ZadZap chapter 2 . 6/15/2009 oh...please update! this is a good story so far |
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 3 . 5/24/2009 Cool chapter. Nice interaction between the siblings. Keep the good writing. |
| TheCheeseGreater chapter 2 . 5/19/2009 I have an idea you could use if you want to. My idea is: in chapter 1 they dont live on the Warner lot; Wakko and Dot get taken away; then Yakko takes them away from the home (sorta like kidnapping them but they want to go). Thats all I've got right now. Its a good story so far. Is you get good ideas, update soon |
| Marcipie chapter 1 . 3/16/2009 No! No! No! -sobs- You can't seperate the Warners you bad man from child services! Only Yakko knows how to take care of them! Ah... continue soon! |
| CheshireCatGrin3421 chapter 1 . 10/16/2008 omg poor yakko! i hope he gets to keep them! |
| Tails Is FLUFFY chapter 1 . 10/1/2008 uh bad spelling but keep it coming |