Reviews for Yakko's Fight
WildKrattsAnimaiacsFan chapter 3 . 2/2/2015
KatherineDarkQueenRiddle666 chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
Update more please
Kathy1993 chapter 2 . 12/9/2012
exams are important
Dracodragonheart chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Please write more please this is pretty good
Amy Yocom chapter 3 . 4/11/2012
It's decent. But not spectacular. When you are writing this please remember the old Show Not Tell. The story jumps around a lot and you keep your chapters a little too short. The story would be more engaging if you would add a hook at the end of a chapter. Something like, "suddenly, There was a knock at the door and my heart filled with dread." Or something to add suspense. Nice start.
KaylaMicael chapter 3 . 2/18/2012
OMG poor Yakko! I hope things work out.
Ritsu Kaiori chapter 2 . 1/20/2010
Sad day!
tothearkNULL chapter 2 . 8/5/2009
longgnol chapter 2 . 7/23/2009
aw poor yakko. but this story is a great idea.
ZadZap chapter 2 . 6/15/2009
oh...please update! this is a good story so far
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 3 . 5/24/2009
Cool chapter. Nice interaction between the siblings.

Keep the good writing.
TheCheeseGreater chapter 2 . 5/19/2009
I have an idea you could use if you want to. My idea is: in chapter 1 they dont live on the Warner lot; Wakko and Dot get taken away; then Yakko takes them away from the home (sorta like kidnapping them but they want to go).

Thats all I've got right now.

Its a good story so far.

Is you get good ideas, update soon
Marcipie chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
No! No! No! -sobs-

You can't seperate the Warners you bad man from child services! Only Yakko knows how to take care of them!

Ah... continue soon!
CheshireCatGrin3421 chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
omg poor yakko! i hope he gets to keep them!
Tails Is FLUFFY chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
uh bad spelling but keep it coming
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