Reviews for The Yellow Maelstrom
Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
Madara was not the first of the Uchiha.

That made me stop reading.
mohahassan3 chapter 4 . 3/4/2013
he should use Kage Bunshin for other like read and chakra control, plus jutsus a great idea will be if he can use all 5 elements
James B chapter 6 . 12/18/2011
This story is very good so far keep up the good work and try to finish it soon and can you please make it a Naruhina fanfiction
An Angry Alien chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
haha this story is great and also on a rank from D to S what would you rank the Sexy jutsu? and again great job!
Venus914 chapter 5 . 2/17/2011
Oh no...you are not bashing Sakura too much. It's not enough. She has always been cruel to Naruto and she didnt get punished at all, although Naruto set her straight once. But that's it. Even Sasuke's rebuke is kinda tame...
Foresthunter chapter 3 . 11/28/2010
you can do it naruto!
kyuubinovelli chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
who put suppression seals on naruto? surely not the fourth.
MugetsuIchigo chapter 12 . 4/4/2010
that was good! on the finding the Sannin mission part surprised me cuz i did not expect it to happen so soon, but anyways! plz update asap!
Shippuuryu chapter 12 . 12/11/2009
excellent
BYoshi1993 chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
This one is much better than the previous chapter.
BYoshi1993 chapter 4 . 12/7/2009
I like the story but I have a few problems with it. Kyuubi seems too nice to me. Even if she was controlled by Madara, she's still a kitsune, a trickster fox. It would be nice to see a few minor pranks to make the story not seem so monotonous. Another thing that is killing me is the dialogue, or rather what is after the dialogue. Maybe it's just me and I don't know what it is that is doing it, but the dialogue just seems to insipid to me (reads kind of like a robot- someone says this, so and so replied...someone asks this, someone answers...). Another problem that bothers me is that I've pretty much seen all of the things done in this story in others; nothing really stands out to me in the story. Maybe come up with a new problem that can't be automatically solved by the Kyuubi or Sarutobi. Finally, the "u" in the flashback really got to me. I guess I should acknowledge that this is fanfiction is is not entitled to be perfect, although a beta would get you to as close to perfect as possible if you don't already have one. Sorry if I have offended, but it's my opinion.

-Michael :D
Whispers12 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
cool
SilverKnight17 chapter 12 . 12/1/2009
this is getting good cant wait for the next update
FF-loverHP1 chapter 12 . 11/15/2009
all i can say is lol...
lady sakura cosmos chapter 12 . 11/15/2009
good chapter
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