Reviews for Foreign
Nella Moonblood Royalle chapter 1 . 1/23
Hahahaha Awesome maybe it is true XD we never know X)
verygreenviolin chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
i like it it captures allens genuine feelings and it flowed really well
ThexLastxPiece chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I absolutely love this! :)
chromiumincast chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
This is so sweet...gave me a weird feeling...:)
Missus Ann chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
I enjoyed it very much! Your writing style just... ah, how do you do it?
Hesunohana chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
quite true.
bloodiedangle chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
That was beautifully phrased.
AngelicDemon97 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
i like it. it's cute with a black twist metal touch if that makes any sense
AlcoholicTree chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
thumbs up on th last sentence! XD!
a1y-puff chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
D'aww~ that was so sweet! The concept of Kanda as something foreign to Allen was interesting. I liked it! And I just loved every single word you wrote there. I liked how you describe the Kanda that Allen sees. And last line was the best!

And I agree with you. Something that wrote itself tend to sound truer, better... :D
Azureila chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Another breathtakingly beautiful story... oh my, how did you manage to do that?

Awesome, as always. Very true, very poignant, very down to earth.

I like how Allen and Kanda seem to lost in each others presence, but I believe, somehow, they'd eventually find each other again.


papatte chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
That was very sweet ! I love the "he's the only Kanda he wants anyway" part.
IOTR chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
"Sometimes he’s pleasantly surprised; other times he finds Mugen at his throat and Kanda a million miles away.

He’d like to keep Kanda close."

I really love
Asa Ayame chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
Aw that was a nice little drabble five stars.
Nayru-chan chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Short but concise, and the descriptions fit wonderfully.

I really loved the last sentence. 8D
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