|Reviews for What a Night for a Breeze|
| Sonar chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
That is what he gets for being the main character. love it.
| MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
That was really funny! I can actually realte to this incident: back a year ago there was a draft in the house and it was freezing. I slept through it fine but my little brother woke up the next morning freezing and sleepy because he couldn't stand the cold! ;) This somehow made me remember...
Anyway,, good job!
| Walkazo chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
There's a draft in my room, so I feel Mario's pain... But the blowing him around part is unnecessarily over-the-top. I found one typo: it should be "WHICH was the bottom of the bunk bed". The "dreampt of cherries" part was a nice touch.
| The GamerSwordsman chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Well, that was certainly a good one shot. And you know your one shots/stories always sseem to make me laugh evry now and again. Anyway nice job and I guess that's it for me.