Reviews for Dreams
Anon chapter 7 . 2/23/2016
Seth imprinting on Nessie sounds like fun. They are sort of the little kids of the pack and the coven.
Anon chapter 5 . 2/23/2016
I'm glad you found something positive about imprinting ;) I always liked Jared/Kim the best because like you they are the ones that make sense to me.
I think Jake never was Beta cause the pack split before he fully reached his power.
Anon chapter 2 . 2/23/2016
Can finding a soul mate really be that scary?
Anon chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
That is a very disturbing thought. Emily would forever know that Sam was with her because he was forced to be with her. In that situation in Emily's shoes I'd consider killing myself very seriously.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/27/2013
Have you ever visited Panlight's tumblr page? it has a lot of the opinions I think you share about the Twilight saga's rougher areas.
shouldabeenblonde chapter 4 . 7/2/2011
I didnt even realize how much imprinting sucks until i started reading fanfics and yours especially shows how bad it is. Good job getting your point across. I feel so bad for poor quil
shouldabeenblonde chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
I hate sam but found this oddly beautiful and heartbreaking. Good job
shouldabeenblonde chapter 2 . 7/2/2011
That chapter was absoluetly fantastic, i loved embry's dreams. Very poetic
shouldabeenblonde chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
Dude i totally agree with you. Paul kinda sucks balls but there are some ppl out there who love him surprisingly, there are quite a few paul/leah and paul/bella fics out there. Idk (shrug) honestly if i wrote twilight jake and leah would be together, bella would have died when she jumped off the cliff like a dumbass, and paul would have imprinted on a chimpanzee. But hey, thats just me
Ms Monster chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
I actually like Paul... REALLY like Paul... I'm just gonna forget that this chapter ever existed
Ms Monster chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
loved it!

the thing is that i feel sorry for Sam... why everyone thinks that he's an ass?

the song was amazing... and it wasn't too graphic for T rating. :D
Saphrilia chapter 2 . 5/27/2010
I love the way you wrote Embry. His personality really comes through in this fic and I like his take on things. That being said, I have some constructive criticism. First, take it easy with those dashes! They're kind of everywhere and I started losing track of where one ended and another began. I think most of the places you used dashes should have been commas instead. And make sure when you do use dashes you put spaces between them, so things are easier to follow! Hope this helps with your writing! )
Martel732 chapter 7 . 5/24/2010
I really enjoyed this entire sequence. Thanks for writing it!
Little Emily chapter 7 . 2/21/2010
Really love it x

Keep writing
bvc17 chapter 7 . 10/14/2009
urgh imprinting loss of will only leah's the sensible one here, haha emily has to hear that sam still loves leah every night thats what she gets!
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