|Reviews for Entwined|
| Suzume Suzuki chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Awww, so sweet and adorable! I loved how you told the story in Black Hayate's point of view! It was a really interesting take.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Love! Love! Love! Amazing fanfic! Great job!
| Hawkstang chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
It's so cute. I loved it ;)
| Roiza chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
This was the first fanfic I've read for these two, and I love it so much!
| Jasane-chan chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Awww, beautifully sweet. I liked how it was in Hayate's POV
| BurningFlame0116 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
| HeyHeyReira chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
I loved how you wrote from Hayate's POV. That was so clever :)
The progression of the story flowed so smoothly. I really liked it.
| Blood Fist Alchemist chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Wow, that was great. Although when it first started I was confused as to who's view point I was reading from. Then when it made sense it made the story that much better. Bravo, good sir.
| ilostmysocks chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
This is so cute! It brought tears to my eyes!
That is the best dog point of view ever! I love the thought process! :D
| WritingWolf14 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
That was SO EPICLY CUTE! I loved it so much!
| Gretchen Collins chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I usually don't express emotion when reading fanfic, but yours made me cry. I have a beautiful picture of Roy and Riza, but from a section I read on Wikipedia, the soldiers aren't allowed to "fraternize" with each other romantically. That depressed me. But I love your story. You're an amazing writer and I love how it's from Black Hayate's POV.
| Ilana Hale chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Awesome, I love the detail.
| TillyMe chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
| RaineyLolita chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
It's cute. And you know, I think all the RoyXRiza fans almost fainted from that scene in FMA. Of course, writing from the dog's perspective was a nice touch. Thumbs up!
| Gii chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Oown, how cute! I loved to see the Black Hayate point of view. and I loved them having a baby *-*