|Reviews for Entwined|
| Kuro chapter 1 . 1/11
That was amazing.
| Minnowkit chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
OMG SOOO CUTE!
| MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
This is by far the most adorable oneshot I've ever read.
| kingleomon13 chapter 1 . 8/13/2015
i was smiling while reading this whole thing... it was very cute and sweet and very well written.
| Otaku chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
OMG ITS AMAZING ROY AND RIZA ARE ️OTP OMG THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL LOVE HOW ITS FROM BLACK HAYATES VEIW️️️️️️
| Suzume Suzuki chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Awww, so sweet and adorable! I loved how you told the story in Black Hayate's point of view! It was a really interesting take.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Love! Love! Love! Amazing fanfic! Great job!
| Hawkstang chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
It's so cute. I loved it ;)
| Roiza chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
This was the first fanfic I've read for these two, and I love it so much!
| Jasane-chan chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Awww, beautifully sweet. I liked how it was in Hayate's POV
| BurningFlame0116 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
| HeyHeyReira chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
I loved how you wrote from Hayate's POV. That was so clever :)
The progression of the story flowed so smoothly. I really liked it.
| Blood Fist Alchemist chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Wow, that was great. Although when it first started I was confused as to who's view point I was reading from. Then when it made sense it made the story that much better. Bravo, good sir.
| ilostmysocks chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
This is so cute! It brought tears to my eyes!
That is the best dog point of view ever! I love the thought process! :D