|Reviews for The Dancers|
| Namesake chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
I thought that this was beautiful, and I liked the way you told the story with nothing but descriptive words/sentences instead of the regular pov. I think it inhanced the dream like quality you were going for. Have a good day. :)
| xmystorytime chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
:O This is really good! It was far too short for my tastes, Lavi/Allen is one of my favourite pairings, and you know what? You actually just inspired me with another plot idea from this... but, yeah. You did good!
| Astarael of Charter chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
wow i really like this. the wording was brilliant i highky enjoyed it and it was soo sweet
| Kiminaru chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Hm...it was well written, but it seems a bit bizarre...not really sure how to describe it...but it was still good
| Tizenanatomy chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Ooh, a dedication *feels posh*
I can see what you mean, it does look a bit short on here, but it should be about quality not quantity ;)
I still love the dancers idea, it's very romantic and dramatic.