|Reviews for House of Crows|
| AshKake chapter 5 . 7/27/2013
I'm really regretting reading this a few years back! I'd love to have been confused as hell wondering who and what she did!
| AshKake chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
I like your Sasuke and I always have. Nice chapter, it's like Sakura and Sasuke have been friends for a while and there wasn't a rift between them at all.
| AshKake chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
This chapter was so funny, I could barely breathe omg lmfaooo
| LittlefootWentBoom chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I'm so sad you no longer write here. I've read every story of yours and I CANNOT put into words how much I adore your writing and stories. In a word, beautiful. I've been so spoiled by your work that I can barely read anything-fanfiction, novels, essays- unless it is up to the level you have set.
I do hope you come back eventually. I don't even know you and I miss you terribly.
| AshKake chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
How suspenseful this story is.. Almost makes me wish I didn't know what worries Kakashi so much.
| AshKake chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Well, I've come back to read this story after 3 years. Being older I hope to retain and reminisce parts of this fic! I'm so excited to get started I can hardly control myself!
Can't wait to start this roller coaster of an adventure!
| leafstone chapter 46 . 7/23/2013
| ElectricViola chapter 7 . 7/15/2013
How the HELL do you write like that
you put published writers, even best-sellers (ahem, guess who i mean) to shame
you're so GOOD, your writing is so concise and subtle and funny and i know it sounds like i'm complaining right now but i'm really not i'm MARVELLING i'm just getting kinda sad thinking you're not a published writer. and if you are, gimme us your name.
story related comment; who's the father though, i'm a little confused. shouldn't be sasuke, because kakashi is supposed to be the hero here, and can't be kakashi, because all the clues are pointing to sasgay. also, he's gay for naruto my heart is breaking
| blancoroja chapter 46 . 7/15/2013
Ugh, this is so flawless and beautiful and amazing and brilliant and-
There are no superlatives that are adequate to describe this masterpiece. This truly is a masterpiece; by far the greatest Naruto fanfiction I have ever read. Whether in plot, or characterization, or emotion, or writing style - you have everything that a reader could possibly dream of a story, and more.
After certain chapters I didn't think this story could get better, but it always did. It never disappointed. Your Kakashi and Sakura are PERFECT, and by that I mean they make me cry and gasp and laugh and often want to punch Kakashi and shake Sakura. By that I mean they're flawed and pesky and consistently themselves.
Karasu is a breathtaking villain, and Aki and Kaoru are lovely supporting characters, and Enoki is the cutest mushroom (and jinchuuriki) EVER. I even loved the role Sasuke played, and Naruto...how can a grown man be so cute, geez? And Tenzou and Ino should just get together already, haha. If they haven't already.
You should really, really, really consider being a professional author I know you wouldn't have a shortage of readers or success.
| artistfingerz chapter 46 . 7/14/2013
Amazing story, I really enjoyed reading this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
This is by far my favorite fanfic on here.
| Mist7 chapter 46 . 7/2/2013
Firstly, a BIG APPLAUSE and an even BIGGER HUG !
Your story is one of the best fanfics I've ever read :D CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome work!
I picked your story out of the blue, right on a whim, because the title was intriguing and the first few lines of the first chapter tugged at my curiosity. At first, I thought 'House of Crows' related somehow to the Uchiha clan, because Itachi Uchiha (who btw happens to me my most loved and respected character in the whole series) has used crows several times :D At that time, it didnt strike me that Kakashi also meant scarecrow.
Well, since I couldnt read the story online continuously (46 chapters), I downloaded them all to my computer and read them at leisure, whenever I found time. All the while, I thought the 'daddy' was Sasuke and that Kakashi would take care of her and the baby because it was a KakaSaku rom-fic. And when I started reading, your story left me winded. Every chapter threw open new facts, endless possibilities and different facets of the characters... (There were moments when I wanted to throttle KAkashi and times when I wanted to throttle Sasuke and times when I wanted to throttle both!)
I felt what the characters felt, and every time I kept guessing what would happen next, your story turned at a sudden weird angle and threw the unexpected right back at me. :D Most stories are predictable. But this one? I couldnt even guess it would end this way.
You are definitely one of the best storytellers I know on this site. :D You just earned yourself a die-hard fan :D
Although I never thought that a pairing between a teacher and his student was morally correct, or that Kakashi would ever show any kind of interest in his little student who was love-struck and weak-kneed for her weird classmate, I REALLY REALLY liked the way you made this romance sound so natural and simple - like the kind of thing that happens with most people. You brought in the characters beautifully and then you morphed the story perfectly into an incredible journey (I'd never forget) and definitely recommend to every naruto lover I know _
The theme was simple, the storytelling - awesome, the plot - intricately woven and kept the curiosity level high, the narration and execution - brilliant, and the ending - just wonderful.
And the best part of it all?
It was LIVELY, BUBBLY, excessively SNAPPY and SMART-assed, and it made me laugh and laugh (except in places where it made me cry). Your writing comes alive and swallows the reader whole and the best part is that she doesnt even realize how much she is lost in the story - until its necessary for her to stop reading and turn off the computer because her husband's calling her to bed...
DAMN GOOD WRITING IN A LONG LONG TIME... This story just made my whole month! 3
Cant wait to read more of your work _
Thanks a bunch for an incredibly good read!
Lots of Love,
| Mist7 chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
I totally love this line:
"...but the rule for girls was that you could be a pervert, as long as no one found out. Reading porn in the presence of a witness was just plain taboo..."
:D You have amazing creativity and wonderful story-telling.
I'm really excited and eager to finish reading it ASAP. :D
p.s. Will write out a more detailed review after I finish reading the epilogue _
| Cherry Blossom Geisha chapter 46 . 6/21/2013
Absolutely love this story! It had such an elaborate plot and twist I was shocked to see that the twins were fumio's! That's craaaazy! Then their child becomes a jinnchuuriki, but I was glad kind of because he had naruto there sooo... Yeah
33 loooooooove this story :D
| chii chapter 46 . 6/16/2013
all i have to say is wow. WOW. that was an absolute PLEASURE to read. thank you so much for sharing it with all of us.