YOU ARE A LEGEND. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FIC. THIS HAS VERN LITERALLY MY LIFE FOR DAYS AND EVEN WEEKS! ONE OF THE BEST

ive read most of this in one day this is that good im on ch 38 and Its 3 am now. this iS SO GOOD AND I LOVE YOUR SASUKE DAMN IT I LOVE HIM YOU MAKE ME LOVE HIM BUT ALSO JUST THE STORY IS SO GOOD AND I RARELY LEAVE REVIEWS BUT IT WOULD BE UNFAIR IF I DIDNT THIS FIC HAS HAD ME SQUEALING AND JUMPING HOLY SHIT ITS LIKE A MOVIE THIS IS BETTER THAN THE ENTIRE PLOT OF NARUTO YOU ARE THE BEST FICTION WRITER IVE COME ACROSS. YOUR CHARACTERIZATION, THE DIALOGUE, THE PLOT. EVERYTHING FLOWS AND FITS AND ITS SO WELL WRITTEN,CLEVER, FUNNY, NOT OUT OF CHARACTER AND WELL PACED. I LOVE YOU AND I HOPE YOU NEVER STOP WRITING WHETHER ITS FANFICTION OR ANYTHING ELSE.

This story is priceless! I really enjoyed reading it. Lived the plot and it's all written so well with so many little details.! So so many times you've bought tears in my eyes... My husband wonders what's wrong with me... It's definitively become one of my favorite stories.! I'm looking forward to checking out your other stories. Thank you so much for sharing this!

aaaaaah great chapter

This story is incredible. The characterization was perfect. The plot played out beautifully. I could hardly put my iPad down while I was reading. I'm a recent inductee into the KakaSaku shippers, and this story is exactly what I've been looking for. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. You're a very talented writer!

Oh my god, I totally love this story! Just can't stop reading!

*tears a little too*

What a great chapter! I love the dialogues and your style! Love the details! I can't wait to read the next chapters!

Nice story...I like it so far! I like the fact that you made me wonder who the father is. It tickles the curiosity! Looking forward to reading the next chapters...and I'm so glad there are so many!

I just have one question.. Who the hell are you? You wrote so damn well! Eventhough The window was my 1st KakaSaku fanfic, this one definately the best completed one I've ever read. The actions, the suspens, the romances, the drama & the humors.. Everything blend together.. It's flawless. Even the OC. Karasu was one hell character. I really hate him to the point I started liking him the more I read the story & couldn't wait to see he suffer. The way you potrayed Kakashi & Sakura were perfect! Their character is not so much different from the original series. And there's Sasuke who acted like an emo tsundere bastard but deep down still care for his friend. Don't even make me start with Yamato. Oh gosh.. He's so funny with his lame pick-up line. I finished this story last sunday & I just couldn't bear the thought that I'm not writing any review even maybe you don't read this anymore. This is the longest review I've ever wrote. Wherever you are, I just want to say thank you so much! The days I spent reading all your fanfic were always the best days in my life! I enjoyed it way too much I think. Please continue writing & best of luck on whatever you are doing right now! Peace!

This should be marked as complete so new readers don't get deterred by thinking it's dead, that'd be such a shame.

Excellent fic BTW! absoloutely loved it! Got into to the pairing, when I thought I'd never like it. The story just drew me anyway and I'm glad it did.

This fic was an emotional roller coaster from beginning to end and I enjoyed it every second. I loved your portrayal of everyone, especially Sakura, who I have read countless fics where she's been depicted as someone weak who can't stand up for herself. I am so glad that you wrote her so strong willed and well rounded. Her reactions were believable and I think that's one of the reasons this was such an amazing read. I loved how you developed the relationship between Kakashi and Sakura and I love how there wasn't some magical ending where suddenly everything was perfect. It was realistic and fulfilling and I loved it. Thank you so much for all of the work you put into this and for gracing this fandom with such an amazing piece of literature.
-Ashley

Ahhhhhh this fic is so amazing. From start to finish it's a total page-turner. Really, this is better than a ton of published novels that I've read... and it has all the elements of a great novel, like an initial "hook," building tension, mystery, lots of twists and turns, and amazing characterization.

Actually I haven't even watched Naruto before, someone recced me your fics. And even so, the writing stands alone, and gives a sense of the wider fictional world, it's amazing! All the characters are really well fleshed out... people who would be one-dimensional in other stories were complex and interesting here. Like Sasuke being somewhat stoic and emotionless, but also having surprisingly sly sense of humor and helping Sakura out of what's left of their friendship. Karasu was also a ridiculously impressive original character... being both an insane and power-hungry antagonist and a charming, affable guy who follows his own moral code.

And the main couple were amazing, of course. The way you've written them, they go together perfectly ahhhhhh. I loved Sakura's growing strength and bravery combined with her temper and biting tongue, and Kakashi's snarky, lazy exterior and complex motivations. And the bickering! Their bickering is so much more charming than any traditional romance.

I hope I haven't totally embarrassed you with this long and flail-y review, but this totally deserves to be a novel. You should get paid A LOT for writing of this quality. Also one night I got like three hours of sleep because of staying up to read it. :D

I really love this fic. It's intense and well written, and it's what got me into KakaSaku.

Mmm!~ Second time reading this fanfic. I admit that it would be cool if there was a sequel, but eh, beggars can't be choosers. Mnn...would it be a crime to say that Dokko n Nya were my favorite characters? I read your other stories...Window and Duty Before Honor. Can't wait to read mire of your works... XD