|Reviews for House of Crows|
| chibi-Clar chapter 40 . 4/11/2015
| chibi-Clar chapter 39 . 4/11/2015
| chibi-Clar chapter 38 . 4/10/2015
This is intense! She's in labor.
Kakkashi has been found out! And,... This is awesome!
| chibi-Clar chapter 37 . 4/10/2015
Oooooooooooo Yamato is going to tell everyone that her kid is kakkashis kid?
| chibi-Clar chapter 36 . 4/10/2015
If kakkashi goes to Konoha he'lol be a prisoner?
| chibi-Clar chapter 35 . 4/10/2015
Oh. Oh. Kekkashi is in trouble.
D doesn't want her to leave to Konoha.
| chibi-Clar chapter 34 . 4/10/2015
Sauske could be the god father...
Oh. Kekkashi is now a missing nin
| Syn'phasia chapter 46 . 4/10/2015
This was SOOOOOO cute! The best of your stories so far! Consider me a fan...eh. I already am. I have much to take from you, your writing...I do appreciate this epilogue. I kinda wish that there was a sequel, but oh well. Such a good ending. But you know, isn't there aleady a 6-tailed being? Utadake or something? (I don't remember. I really don't look at Naruto much anymore. There is too much filler, and the last point I remember is when Kobuto resurrected the old ninas for battle...)
This is by far the best of them. You know, I think you switch your style of writing. When I read your story "The Window", it had a more...casual feel to it. "Duty Before Honor" had a more informative feel to it. This one was a few pebbles away from formality, but it was soo good! You know the thing that astounded me the most? The lack of smut. So when I read an M rated fanfic, I expect a few rounds of smut. But the only smut there was...well...I think the scene with Sakura and Kakashi originally, and the other one...two or three out of a 46 chapter story. Isn't that amazing? But you're amazing, so I guess that's why...
As always, I rant on and on when I am in love with a story. I read Duty Before Honor, what, three to four times within the last two years? So please don't be (disgusted) surprised when you see my name again. I only visit so much because I like your writing. And really, when I look at my own, although it /is/ still developing, I can't even compare the two. So I kind of look up to you most of all.
Thanks for the ride!
| chibi-Clar chapter 33 . 4/10/2015
| chibi-Clar chapter 32 . 4/10/2015
Lol! Yes! He's asked her to marry him! Yes!
| chibi-Clar chapter 31 . 4/10/2015
| chibi-Clar chapter 30 . 4/10/2015
I knew it! He did want her.
| Syn'phasia chapter 31 . 4/10/2015
You know...I was supposed to review at the end, until I looked at your user and realized that you are the same person who I read the initial KakuSaku story for...so sorry for that. It was really awkward (for me at least) to realize that you're the same person.
Anyways! Kakashi and Sakura have gone through a lot in this story, and this chapter has me wondering if they will have a good ending, or if something will happen that will undoubtedly make this story a tragedy. I mean, tragedies are usually labelled, right? But there are 15 chapters left, and I have this (pessimistic) feeling that something will happen that might destroy Kakashi and Sakura and their cute baby (I would so draw a picture for you of their baby if I had a DEVIANTart account...too lazy)...this is a drama after all. I did a filler review, sorry, but I read this and I kind of just reviewed what came to mind. THIS time, I will wait till the end.
Thanks for your awesome chapters!
| Syn'phasia chapter 30 . 4/10/2015
I wasn't going to say anything, because it didn't look finished, but I took a tab on your chapters, and it IS done...so I am sorry for my delayed review.
I had read someone else's work on KakuSaku-you might have heard it. It is called Duty Before Honor, and it is really good. I know it is impolite to mention another person's story on the one you are reading, but I have a purpose for bringing this up. That story kind of...I don't know, it introduced me to the KakuSaku franchise. It gave me an impetus to look for more...and then I found yours, and I fell in love. (See? I told you this was going somewhere. :D) I love how Kakashi and Sakura are personalized, as if it were really going on in the anime. This fanfiction is dark in a...kind of light way. Its weird, but I love it, because its so dramatic and wonderful. I think that this Kakashi is closer than most I have seen thus far (yeah, I am reading your works along with others...but I am father along in yours than in most) to his real character. Yeah, he's lazy, and he's a perv, but its also true that he has a "real" side to him, a serious side that has seen many things. The way that he protects Sakura with that "real" side makes me really happy...
And Sakura! You know, I wasn't sure how to take her bitter side, but really, it fits kind of well with her character...I think she is slightly weaker than how she is depicted in the anime, but really, she is perfect. I think that her bitterness due to Kakashi's first reactions is something that is very possible. The whole back story of the Hatake Clan has me thinking...I want to ask questions, but then this review will be a few pages long...as it is, I already made this review much longer than I wanted to...but its a testimony to how much I like this story. So anyways, I will probably review once more at the end like I usually do, so see ya at the end!
| chibi-Clar chapter 29 . 4/10/2015
Wow! Intense! I figured Sakura would ask him about their night together or his feelings...