|Reviews for The Text|
| riorio chapter 1 . 5/5
Great story! Thanks! :)
| MAL chapter 1 . 4/23
Textbook plot, but oh my... such a good wonderful fic. I love everything about this. Your writing is beautiful.
This is amazing. It isn't just some texts with a story thrown around it, to make it ok to put up on . This is a well constructed story. This is a story with texts to flesh out the story even further. The texts go hand-in-hand with the story. Its awesome, and totally IC.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
| Refraction of Light chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
| CeeCee Dragneel chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Aww! That was so sweet. :) I really liked this-great job!
| Gemini011 chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
You have a freaking gift for making good fanfiction. It honestly makes me wish I liked more of the series you write for so that I could enjoy your writing longer. Thank you for making my day.
| skittyscatter chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Oh my god. Squealing, here - so adorable! Oh, Ash and Misty and their strange ways of making up...
| claraowl chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
XD *laughs hysterically* I loved it! You capture them so well!
Wow, Ash. How could you leave her like that?
| Woodrokiro chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
... I'm pretty sure this whole thing made me swoon.
Oh, Ash. Why are you so damn irresistable? Amazing job.
| sundayguts chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
One of the BEST stories Ive ever
| empathapathique chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I think you did a brilliant job of telling the story through texts. Great work!
| Steveaaml chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
No way I haven't reviewed this yet?
Great work. Really got the characters down. I loved this moment:
"As if he actually understood that what he'd done was wrong. And in his doing this, Misty knew that Ash truly, genuinely, and completely meant everything he'd put in the notes he'd sent her…
And that frightened her more than words could express.
Shaken, she read the newest note:" -Perfect character development, wonderful written, beautifully timed.
Also nice bookending with the bits about Misty's types of days.
| Pichu123 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Awesome story! looovveed it!
| Crystalgurl101 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
That is E-X-A-C-T-L-Y how i pictured Misty would accept a proposal! :D :D :D
"Will you marry me?"
"...Fine then." *shuts door on Ash* BRILLIANT! xD
This was one of the very, very few stories i've read that are near-perfection! I ADORED this story, it left me with the biggest, goofiest smile on my face! _ Loved it loved it loved it! I couldnt have asked for a better way to end my night!
| lovering chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
"Her eye twitched. How very much like Ash, ruining a moment of beauty by
Best line in the whole story, i loved it XD.
The proposal was a bit sudden, but I loved the way Misty handled it. :D Great job.
| Texas Longhorn chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Really great story!