Reviews for Amaryllis
jjbroadway chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
This is a great start! I'm excited for a new chapter :D
Aspen Le Fay chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
well i thought you did a very fine job on the first chap.
PurpleHat chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Nice start. Nice interaction between the brothers too.

Just a warning, elves do not become ill.

A couple of nitpicks:

"before mouthing the smoke-colored mare"should be "before mounting the smoke-colored mare"

"Diesease" should be "disease" (in summary)
ginger-05 chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
great job so far, please update asap!