|Reviews for Amaryllis|
| jjbroadway chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
This is a great start! I'm excited for a new chapter :D
| Aspen Le Fay chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
well i thought you did a very fine job on the first chap.
| PurpleHat chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Nice start. Nice interaction between the brothers too.
Just a warning, elves do not become ill.
A couple of nitpicks:
"before mouthing the smoke-colored mare"should be "before mounting the smoke-colored mare"
"Diesease" should be "disease" (in summary)
| ginger-05 chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
great job so far, please update asap!