Reviews for Goodbye Naruto Uzumaki
Jyuubi no Naruto chapter 3 . 8/24
Nicely done
frytrix chapter 1 . 8/1
You seriously need to look for a beta/typo who can correct your spelling before you post the chapters.
It was a headace to read, you have rather good ideas and i like the outline of the story but i dont think i can read further if all your chapters are spelled like this.
I wish you the best of luck in your writing and improvement of your spelling.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19
Honestly, this isn't the greatest I've ever read. Slow down stuff, fix your Grammer and spelling, and Sasuke calls Naruto a DOBE not a DOPE. Learn the naruto references please.
anthony1997 chapter 3 . 7/16
Hombre con suerte tener tantas mujeres a la vez jeje , buen capitulo pobres kurenai , anko y hana al no estar en la cita jejeje, ahora lo malo esperar. Saludós desde Venezuela
Ying the Nine Tail Fox chapter 3 . 7/8
Update soon.
Naruto Loves FemKyuubi chapter 3 . 7/2
Hey It's Me Sasha Naruto/Naruto Loves FemKyuubi!:) My Dear Dragoon Of Darkness!:3

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snake1980 chapter 3 . 7/1
man great job on the new chapter. I am so looking forward to the next chapter and to see who will be the next girl/girls that go on a date with naruto
KuronoDono12 chapter 3 . 7/1
Came across this story today and I have ot say i like it so far. I am looking forward to seeing the meeting between Naruto and Hinata and hope that she now has the courage to confess her feelings for him since she almost lost him before telling him how much she loves him
Fox Anbu Assassin chapter 3 . 7/1
don't listen to Tsukoblue
Tsukoblue chapter 3 . 7/1
Please take Tsume off the harem and have Rin be a distantly related Inuzuka clan member to Hana if you are going to have her in it or give Rin her canon surname?, Rin Nohara
BANKAIZEN chapter 3 . 7/1
interesting
jh831 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
here is a crazy idea...stop writing new stories and finish the ones you have.
or you don't care about leaving people hanging?
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2014
Worst I've ever read.
Better luck next time.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
You know I thought of something good for your stories that could get you a lot of reviews.

How about you write a story about Naruto being the jinchuuriki of all tailed beasts and he awakens sharingan rinnegan mokuton and he becomes the sage of six paths.

I've read stories about Naruto being the reincarnation of the sage of six paths and it has had over 4000 reviews.

Maybe if you try writing a story like this you could get that many reviews too.

By the way this story is awesome despite the amount of chapters, anyways later.
coduss chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
good start, nice harem picks so far

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