Reviews for Inside Out
Miladys chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Lol lol lol.

I can't stop laughing when i read 'ready, steady, go!' what kind of sex is that? XDD

nah, don't worry, i like the way you decribe it..

Cookies for the hot lemon! ;)
Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Not blushing sure...

more like...



I love this kind of fics~

Good job doesn't even begin to cover it~
wirbil chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Poetic and elegant. This is really something amazing to read. :) Happy Writing. :D
Erika Hearken chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
This was tastefully beautiful. I loved the flow and the way you described this event. It was both intense and heart warming.

I found, that while I read this, that "My Soul Ghost" by Dana Kerstein fit to the fiction really well as I listened to it while reading. I love this. It's definitely going to be a favorite. Very good job.
azab chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
i loved it
Tossino chapter 1 . 10/13/2008

I don't care if it was vague. It fits you. This poetic style that is. I honestly couldn't have thought of you writing this in another way, because then it wouldn't really be you.

I really can't explain in words how much I loved this. It was really, really captivating and just gorgeous. This goes into my favs, no doubt.

*Pours more praise than can be counted or measured in any way over you*

I HEART you for writing this! *-*
Annette Aoi chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
You made it seem pretty. TwT

lol I usually hate PWP, but this was really good. Although, I wouldn't really call it porn; it was too poetic.

Anyways, I really liked it. nn

I have nothing to give advice on. haha The structure was really good for the story and no grammer or spelling mistakes (if there are any) stood out enough to be noticed.

Keep up the good work!
Sarahfreak chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Oh so this was what you were worrying about *grin* I have to say that it was an interesting and different one from you, but no less fun to read. Well done for venturing into the murky darkness that makes up the fangirls soul and delivering us this story...vague is good, it leaves it up to the readers to decide what is happening and it was good to get the more emotion ridden side rather then the 'let's-screw-each-other-senseless-for-the-entire-story'. Great writing. Loved it!
bluesonmondays chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Hm... it feels different from your previous writing actually. Experimenting new styles perhaps? XD but i like it very much. Especially this line at the end..

And then there were the refreshing waves of pleasure.

its like, 'whoa!' knocked me off my brain. XD In short, damn i love this so much!
Morphine Dementia chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
It was somewhat dark and crazy...and you should know I love things like that. :3

Your 'vague' descriptions are just for my taste; I envy your vocabulary (yeah, seriously. I can never put all the details in a way I'd like completely because of the language barrier); and the darkness?irony? whatever it is, it fit so well, and the end was - maybe not exactly 'happy', but not anything bad either.

Great work! x3
Winterblazewolf chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Woots, nice one. It's okay that it's not so detailed. It's still good! D
Julye chapter 1 . 10/3/2008


My Kro-chan finally wrote an M-rating fic, didnt she? *giggles*

Haha, I was surprised, but happy. Lol. Dont think of me as a pervert, I was just happy knowing eventually your way of writing this kind. And, as expected, different it was. And impressive. Yes, me loves it. Not dirty at all but sweet and hot. Haha I love it. Glad ya wrote it, but feel bad for yer killer school. *hugs*

Me, on the other hand, pressure from school leads me to the pix of doom and blood. Haha.
melric chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
I missed you! :]

hahaha,well I have to say i wouldnt rate this as a lemon - 'cause the ones i have read tend to be very very graphic, and concentrate solely on the sex; perhaps it should be called a very sexual one shot. (?)

whatever it is I like it - but because its rather psychological. I tend to feel your stories are sad (why? I have the idea you dont write them to be sad right?) well its just that kanda thinking about the lotus while doing you know what its a bit, you know , sad. maybe its the pairing, both are more than a little tragic.

no matter, I still liked it.

oh i had forgotten, when i say canon i mean they are very in character - i dont know from where did i get the word- but i mean that for me they behave as if hoshino had written them )
Chapppyy chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
no worries; it was awesome D

i use that wrd too much -_-""
dead or alive0013 chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
yes... I know how school can make you lose your last strand of sanity...(I'm holding on to my last one at this very moment)...

This is the first time I've read a lemon fic that is very... safe. But still... Hot. hehehe... Even if the exact words are not there, I think it was still easy to see what was happening (me and my perverted mind...XD)

Anyway... nice job!
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