Reviews for Where One's Loyalty Lies
NeonZangetsu chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
WHAAAAAT? Why have you not updated this glorious fic in two years?
darkfinder chapter 4 . 6/10/2009
that was little weird .
darkfinder chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
lilyrose chapter 5 . 6/5/2009
I like your fanfiction; it's interesting.

I don't know if this is what you mean, but to me it's obvious. The guy watching is "R," aka Lelouch, but I'm not too sure how you're explaining his living. Maybe he's been reincarnated. The guy "Kami" is an evil dude trying to take over the world, and he might be a dead-reanimated-Lelouch. He's using Lelouch's Geass.

Oh! I just had another idea! Maybe Kami and Lelouch switched bodies somehow, and Kami's going to mess with C.C.

I'm sorry. I really have no clue. Please keep writing! : )
Traitor-Hero chapter 5 . 6/3/2009
Love the fic. Can't wait till chapter five is done!

Knightmare - The Nero

Design - A color that stands out, such as a bright red or dazzling blue. It is not bulky in the torso, and the torso can rotate 360 degrees. The main weapon is a sort of harpoon gun worn on the right or left leg. The legs are quite bulky, but they are highly resistant to fire, both natural and gun-wise. The torso is gaurded by a force-field system, but it's not fully tested, so be careful!

Main Use - The Nero is a combat type, usually seen in the heat of battle. The production is limited, with only one currently known. The exorbitant cost of building has led to the belief that it will not be put into mass production. Theresore it is a sort of command Knightmare.

Hope you enjoy! Can't wait for your next chapter!

rultas chapter 4 . 5/31/2009
You have Brisingr? I want that! I only have Eldest since Eragon wasn't review!

1. 9. 10 is the best right?

2. Probably because of something Lelouch did as Zero. I know I'm wrong!

3. C.C. I know it's her!

4. Something like Lelouch's?

Anyway, I like your story! Please update soon.
A midsummer night's dream chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
Weird but interesting...
ADD Kyuubi Naruto chapter 4 . 10/25/2008
I'll answer your questions

You get a 7 out of 10 because the concept is great but you haven't let the story and time line develop, you should have let a few years pass write a few time passages and THEN start with the plot.

for 2, since I know nothing of the character I can't say

3) C.C.

4) "Kami" probably has a Geass similar to Lelouche as in the eye contact rule, probably intended for some form of manipulation
Jaricchi chapter 4 . 10/17/2008
ill rate it an 8


he reminds me of someone...

cant put my finger on it

i think CC was watching.


great job on the fic.
Rekrah chapter 4 . 10/16/2008
1) 9.. need more CCxLL .

2) a) Because a family member or BF was in Lelouch's army when he was emperor and when Zero killed Lulu, all the soldiers where judge and sentence to death or something similar.

b) When Lulu was Zero he killed a family member (he don't know who Zero is)

3) a) When C.C. was young (before she had her geass), she had a older sister (let's call it Diana) but they were selled to different masters.. we all know what happened to C.C., but Diana's master fall in love with her... so her descendent was the girl who was watching was Diana's grand grand...grand daughter Gabriella.

b) It was C.C. )

4) Kami geass is similar to lulu's geass... he can 'control' people.. but kami's geass can be used in a single person multiple times (once every 24 hours), but it has time limit (like Rolo's)
imaginedreams22 chapter 4 . 10/16/2008
woohoo!update soon!also how many pgs did u type for this?
Jaricchi chapter 3 . 10/14/2008

i would rate it a 9.

i don't know why, but its good.

very good.


i do not want to guess.

but eh reminds me of lulu.
shiai10 chapter 3 . 10/8/2008
um i have no idea who kami-sama is wen i see kami i think of death note and Kira. So far the story is very interesting so i hop update like 2morro. jk- i noe stories take time. just update soon
imaginedreams22 chapter 3 . 10/8/2008
i think kami is someone that zero hurt during the battles. this story so far is a but its just that i dont see the plot yet. but later on it might go higher. keep it up!:)
Zammy chapter 3 . 10/8/2008
Please update soon
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