Reviews for Don't Take the Girl
MamaJoyof3 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I have loved this song since it was released and you have made an AWESOME AND WONDERFUL story!
mafe47 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
i love this story :) it made me cry, almost.
Honeytarded-Twins chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
awww ok i totally LOVED this story..i am sooo HAPPY You didn't kill Bella off..i was crying when i thought she was dying..i loved it keep up the GREAT work..signed Mitsuko
Stjerneskudd24 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
The song this one-shot is inspired by is one of my favourite songs, and I like the way you made it into an actual story. :)

I'm not so sure about the way you followed the lyrics so accurately, though. It made it seem awkward and not very real-life.
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Whew! You had me in tears at the end.
ArmyRabbit chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
um are you writing more? cause i wanna read more its soo interesting oh and keep writing
Lori94 chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
This song always makes me cry! I love your story!
YummyYamanaka chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
So Cute. 3
Jennie T Cullen chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Ah! Really good.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Liked it a lot.
lovetoread19 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I've always loved this song and i thought it was a really good version of the song.
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
AHH! this is one of my absolute favorite songs! I love Tim. He was my first concert! haha i think i was eight! Which is funny and ironic to this story! lol! anyways story time! D Aww.. that was so sweet... i had tears rolling down my face as i read the last words to the song. it was amazing! and i loved every bit of it! D Pure perfection! :D so i must go.. lol! Stories later... )

joy chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
That was a very sweet and short story! you could make that a full out story ( from 8yrs old to present) I'd read!
Suza1981 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Geez.. Such a sweet story.
00Edward-cullen-lover00 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
aw...another amzing story.
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