Reviews for Don't Take the Girl
missysaaa.crystal chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Soo sweeet and romantic :)
k1942 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Good Lord girl, I turn into a weepy old woman every time I hear Tim sing that song, so you can just imagine how your story affected me! Good job!
colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Aww...this is so sweet. :)

I'm gunna have to go and find the song...
Jocelynlynn chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Very cute story..
bookworm2341 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
i loved it

LaniBartend chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
That was so sweet :)
AJLYAMBER96 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
i love that song. in 4th grade a friend of mine sang that song for the talent show 4 years ago.
EdwardCullenizor chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
So cute. Now the second story that I have read to this song.
wolfienur chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Aww, I loved Bella's last line: "We did good, didn't we daddy?"

Sometimes when Edward is talking, and you use the same lines from the song, it's a little awkward, but this story is really amazing overall.

And THANK YOU! I heard this song a few times while I was on a road trip with my parents 3 or 4 years ago, it really touched me, but I never knew the title. And now I do. xD
MamaJoyof3 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I have loved this song since it was released and you have made an AWESOME AND WONDERFUL story!
mafe47 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
i love this story :) it made me cry, almost.
Honeytarded-Twins chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
awww ok i totally LOVED this story..i am sooo HAPPY You didn't kill Bella off..i was crying when i thought she was dying..i loved it keep up the GREAT work..signed Mitsuko
Stjerneskudd24 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
The song this one-shot is inspired by is one of my favourite songs, and I like the way you made it into an actual story. :)

I'm not so sure about the way you followed the lyrics so accurately, though. It made it seem awkward and not very real-life.
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Whew! You had me in tears at the end.
ArmyRabbit chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
um are you writing more? cause i wanna read more its soo interesting oh and keep writing
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