Reviews for Crossing
Seine chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
It's good. I like it. You should do some sort of spinnoff or crossover thing with the same idea. Sounds good.
SavagePhantasie chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
beautiful... grammer can be used, but still beautiful.
Sylvyr Elf chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
Wow. Very beautiful. I like it very much.
SakuraSyaoran4eva chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
I Love this fic! It's very original and unlike the usual Kaiyako stuff. Please update soon.
BabyBird chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
"Farther from your light I wander

Your hope is fading from my sight

Our bond dissolves like salt in water

I can lean on you no more..." Beautiful.
Blazing-moon chapter 1 . 3/17/2002
Beautiful...that's all I can say...I mean, the words are so pretty, and wonderful...and the emotions are so amazing! You are an amazing writer!
Au Printemps chapter 1 . 2/2/2002
Remember me? Probably not, but anyhoo...that was a really good poem, and you could definitly use it as a stand-alone if you wanted. And of course, it goes without saying that it'd make the best prologue for a story known to mankind. Ok. Maybe I'm exagerating just a *leetle*. But wow...I'm a true-blue fan of your writing now.
Tashana Ambrosia chapter 1 . 12/27/2001
Nicely written. If you work a story off of this I'd be very interested in reading it. Anyways the poem is awesome you've got some real talent.

kaiyako's anoymous chapter 1 . 12/21/2001
woah really good very poetic please continue!
ZaPhA chapter 1 . 11/16/2001
Rose Silverstein too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 11/16/2001
Kewl poem!