Reviews for Lurking Evil
amaya-nights rain chapter 2 . 12/18/2010
x3 you should write for this more/again it sounds pretty cool xD
CrazyAsCoconuts-4 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
This is awesome so far! plz continue.
TerrorInYerTub chapter 2 . 3/20/2010
hey i really like this story n i was wounderin if ya were ever goin update it?
Lenadexil chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
Oh my god! Please, update this soon! I HAVE TO READ MORE!
RabidYaoiFanboy chapter 2 . 10/22/2008
wow...

need...need more...becoming...zombie...

XD

i liked this chapter a lot! now all we need is to find out how he ended up in the cage talked about before...
Lord Makura chapter 2 . 10/18/2008
oh.. boy zombie.. Good but i'm lost (never saw Resident evil or play)
RabidYaoiFanboy chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
this is a GREAT start. i wanna know about hte experiments, if it's hojo behind it, and yadda yadda. what happened to Shinra or sephiroth? i'm so full of questions i'm dying to know what happens next!

i love the last line. maybe a little cliche but still good. the beginning could use a little more strength. try getting rid of the first sentence and have it start with 'those who try to escape the memories are hunted'. that would make the first line stronger and give it the oomph you want to draw people in.

yeah. little work, another go at the polishing wheel, and i cannot wait for chapter two!
xXRemXx chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Sounds really interesting, I want more! D
Simsie92 chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Looks interesting, can't wait for more. :D
Lord Makura chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
sound interesting ... maybe a little longer next time would be better!