Reviews for The Ring, A Short Story
My Silver Angel Wings chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
Continue... HI!
Lisilsasya chapter 2 . 10/29/2008
allie chapter 2 . 10/29/2008
this story is good hope u continue
tnmebd4life chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
OME! Your story is really nice (it would NEVER, EVER, not in the eternity that Edward will live, happen)but in all it's very good. You have a good imagination. But really he kills her thats like Edwards worst and ONLY fear.
Starrletta11 chapter 2 . 10/28/2008
Ah Must. See. What. Happens. Next!
juhajfknbkjagbiugb chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
This is really good. It is unrealistic... But I have to admit I always wanted to know what it would be like if Edward actually killed Bella. :P Anyways... IT'S GOOD!
musically inclined chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Whoa, man! Intense!

alpacacat0401 chapter 1 . 10/2/2008

thats kinda rlly depressing

u should make a sequel or another chapter so it was all just a bad dream or something. omg thats so sad!
max chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
I actually liked it. you should write more.
FangIggyLuver chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Are you going to continue the story? YOU BETTER LOl its a great start
ScarletteVamp chapter 1 . 10/2/2008