Reviews for Dishpig and Snowball, Matchstick and Bookmonger
pinkedgirl chapter 7 . 2/6/2011
OMG! Best story ever!

I love the way you write the characters! It's awesome how well you describe the dynamics of the group! and all the details of your story!

The post-apocalytptic future and the high school years!

I really enjoyed reading these chapters! I promise I'll review each one separately! but please update soon!

You truly are a talented writer! keep up the great work!

Thanks for such a lovely story!
kbird213 chapter 7 . 11/3/2010
luvvvvvs it! you have to update soon! i love that the girls are perverts...i feel right at home in this story:) seriously, update soon, or i'll be forced to unleash an estrogen-induced rage and those never end prettily.
Talis Ruadair chapter 7 . 9/23/2010
Okay, I really start getting into the story and it just ends. It's been a couple of months. Please update soon. Though I have to admit the prologue bits kind of confuse me at times. I'm hoping things are shed more. I kind of get something happened to cause their power's to go haywire and their living or rather dying in some post-apocalyptic world. I’m sure it’ll make more sense when I read more. Also how far in the future are the haywire bits? I understand the main part of the story takes place two years after the movie, but what about the Warren being in the hospital on morphine bits or the Layla loving her sentient plants more than Will bit? I hope that life allows you to update soon.
Katarzyna93cr chapter 7 . 9/18/2010
Oh no! Update soon!

What an exciting cliffhanger haha
Katarzyna93cr chapter 6 . 9/17/2010
Haha I love these two xD
Katarzyna93cr chapter 4 . 9/17/2010
Haha Im loving this so far it's great if not a little confusing sometimes.

I loved how this chapter ends!
stormsandsins chapter 7 . 7/7/2010
That next chap had better be a continuation or I would kill you with my bare hands, biatch.

Nice bits with the girls (rough play haha), and Warren is such a boy (jerking off), but it's okay. And lol, he's a cat dude.

Not much else to say about this chapter. Good stuff, bb, good stuff. It's insane how well you write teenagers (I feel ancient!) so keep it coming!
RubarbandCustard chapter 6 . 3/6/2010
Hey brill story but for the sake of my sanity get those two together already!
stormsandsins chapter 6 . 2/16/2010
Oh! Just so you know, I'm so tired I have to squint to see straight and not double, even with my glasses on. It's bad. I need bed... But instead I read this and SQUEED like you wouldn't believe and hahaha it's even better than I imagined so :D

You really have a thing for the word fecking, eh? ;) No worries!

Damn you woman, now I want Warren to send Mag or Lo a picture of himself half-naked. Dayum. And hahaha the entire conversation was awesome, I loved it.
livinglifeasitis chapter 3 . 1/27/2010
Gr, ch. 2 review got cut off...right.

Ah no? Really Lo. But its Warren. Hm. Refer to my comment on there being a past we, the readers, don't know details about.

Falconswift-making a note of that...The romantic in me says: Dolores is like the sky, that is moving too fast away.

"“Why do you call her that.” He asked it sadly, like they were talking about something that had a lot of baggage attached to it." Hrmm why would he be sad? There probably is a lot of baggage attached to it.

What is warren oblivious too?

"He couldn’t find it in him to disagree for more than just one reason that he wouldn’t have been able to articulate anyway." And that cinches the whole...there is a past thing and I'm going to die if I don't find out within the next 2 years...depending on your updating habits No pressure. It's a perfect last line. Makes me want more.

Ch. 3

Mad Science notes? I doubt Science notes would not have needed to be retrieved from a burnt up file cabinet. Global Guardian senses are screaming here.

Key things I have taken note of...or what I think are clues...

doses-there's an antidote to w/e that is affecting people...people not just supers.

2. It appears virus like-with in the body at least...but i have to wonder on how it is spread...

3. "The world was left with the cigarette butts and coffee dregs of the ‘inactives’ pool, the people who had the goods but didn’t want to sell them, the heroes who left the business or never got into it in the first place, around to save the world.

The Sick and the ‘Getting Better’ was all there was. No more heroes, no more sidekicks. The diseased and the evolving."

4. If it's gotten so badly to Will,who I think everyone has written of as indestructible, it can't be a physical (as in monster robot) threat...unless the robot is miniscule and has entered people's systems...

5. Why did Lo leave? Why did Warren (and Magenta) stay behind? Stay behind *together*...gr...

"Who dug the hole?" Involved in what and is that the same thing Magenta is involved in...

This insn't very review like...sorry...at this rate i'm going too C&P the whole chapter and psychoanalyse it...wait I'm already doing that...

6. "Wolves couldn’t be lapdogs.

And there weren’t enough wolves to form packs. " Makes me think the supers are the wolves...

7. i think Dolore's *feelings* (bout Warren) still linger..."get what she needed and get him out...wasn’t sure if both were the same thing"...actually it's hinted at severely throughout the whole chapter...the slight jealousy at Warren/Magenta is explored too...

Oh and she's met his mother/or Warren has talked about her-indicating a close relationship? "his mother had always done that"

...

Ch.4

Lo is certainly very studious...

Is Dolores so into/denial with Warren that it makes her slighly dislike all other guys? hrm... The interactions with Alecksi and her revealed some and then made me want to ask more...
livinglifeasitis chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
You know (well duh you do...) Global Guardians seems to be a recurring theme/thing...Makes one wonder if the are integral to whatever seems to be happening to the supers... :D

Even though your prologue chapters are driving me nuts...your even numbered chapters are doing that too..There always seems to be hints to some type of backstory between the characters, that the audience just isn't privy to (yet). I'm getting between Warren and Dolores, a been there-date scene thing but didn't work out but both are yearning(?)/still wanting each other mutually but are stuck in the awkward friends who want more stage.

Who is the older woman? Does she ever get named (like aunt/grandma or something...)Your chapters are so packed with everything I always seem to forget something while I notice something else...That's a good thing btw.

I wonder what Lo is doing at her internship? Is it an internship?

LOL at A-mystery. Funny.

WTF is going on between Maj and Warren. Why are they so close?Simple relatonship between co-smokers-yeah right.

They both have drivers ed on Friday...

Zack is such a wannabegangsta-white boy.

Warren must have feelings of some sort (in the interested in more category)if he gets zoned out by hearing her chinese takeaway order.

Where are Lo's parents? They haven't popped up...

Yes. Warren is indeed HOT. :D

"... didn’t come back at all this summer." makes me think Lo's w/e with the Global Guardians seems to be a recurring thing (hm...there they are again...Glob. Guardians)

" you know what we usually do on a school night" what do tey do on a school night? Is this a reference to smoking?
livinglifeasitis chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
So...I've been rereading...I think I'm on my tenth take now...and I keep noticing all threse little things that make me go wha- and perk up.

Nicely as possible...any chance of a teaser?

I love the wall/handbook think. And Wall Code... :D

The banter you included is fun.

Scrapbook? But why would he want to look for clues.

*Frowns.* Your Prologue chapters give me so much to think about...

Leading theory: Virus that has infected the supers...makes the infected go crazy...

On my to ponder list: "They were really the last ones left."
livinglifeasitis chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
This story is just amazing. I love it so much my brain has turned to mush and i want to gush and babble about while jumping up and down.

It's so enticing and enthralling and the story just leaves you to want to know everything. Like what are theirs ties/relationship dynamics, WTF is happening in the prologue scenes what happened to them all...etc, etc...My brian is going to explode.

I've read through your reviews. All the ones left for chapter 3 confused me then I remembered this is a revamped version...however I can't help but ask do you still have a copy of the old version,how many chapter it was, somewhere where I can read it? PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?

I wan't to know about this gift Magenta gave Margo...which I will assume is the former name for your OC? Please? I'll even send you a virtual cookie...

Please update as soon as you can!
stormsandsins chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
Enjoying this greatly as always :) I always love your no-bullshit-this-is-life-whatever point of view. And the lulz keep on coming, hon :) Cynical lulz, and sometimes I'm just barking with laughter and people wonder wtf I'm reading, haha.

Aha, that smoking scene with the two of them, that's very v.1.0. Nice to bring that one back.

Magenta, Magenta, Magenta, you sneaky little bitch ;) But hey, I'm not complaining. Now she and Warren need to talk!
Sakura Scout chapter 2 . 11/1/2009
I do believe that you've upped the ante with this revision, particularly with the first chapter being in media res.

Since my brain is too dead right now to be any more articulate, I'm just going to thank you for updating/revising/whatever this fic. I look forward to more chapters, some of which will hopefully find their way to before the year 2010.
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