Reviews for I Want, You Wish Whatever
louise chapter 1 . 5/13
i love this.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/7
As passionate as I found the smut to be, the relationship that led up to the smut was very tepid. They were still in the "getting to know you" phase and didn't seem to have more than light crushes on one another. You can't say they were building up the UST during the date. It was incredibly tame, all things considered. Up until the smut happened, the most romantic thing they'd done was a little bit of hand-holding. It was hard to tell if Naruto was even attracted to Sasuke most of the time, yet once the smut started, they were going at it like it like they had some type of long-denied passion. Can two people who spent only ONE afternoon getting to know each other feel that type of passion and devotion to one another?

It was like the smut in this fic belong to some other couple, not this one. If you wanted a sex scene where Naruto was comparing Sasuke to Michelangelo's David, there needed to be a different buildup to it, one where the couple was far more emotionally invested in one another. You don't use lines like that on someone you barely know. Sasuke only found out Naruto's name right before they fucked. Good sex scene, but your character development needed some work.
parsimonia chapter 1 . 1/23
I loved it. It was sweet, funny and extremely hot!
Thank you so much for writing it!
Love xxxx
roti bakar chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
new religion: PWP Gods

awesome!

can't stop the nose bleed! you really made my sasunaru day! *tears of joy*
DChan21 chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Great story! To bad it is a oneshot, I would have love to see them more. Specially Naruto and meeting Sasuke's family!
NotJustAGirlJustMe chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
I loved it! Really sweet. I'm glad they get to live happily ever after! I wonder what Itachi thinks, haha!
Nella Moonblood Royalle chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
Whoa...
*never-ending nosebleed*
RoniBopShop chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
I really would like to see you expand this or at least do a sequel. This was very nice and I absolutely loved it.
jupimako chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
:D
BreezyAnimetra chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Loved it
roker1001 chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
This story was so gosh darn freaking good. I loved every single word of it. 3
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
lovly!sooooo cute!
miri chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
por favor has una secuela
jj chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
nice
keltieful chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
Amazing. Just amazing.
I'm not quite sure how anyone could possibly fall asleep through that?
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