|Reviews for Sage of the Leaf|
| geetac chapter 9 . 5/28/2009
I like the chapters for this story and want more.
| TenshiFighter chapter 9 . 5/27/2009
i really enjoyedm this sotry can't wait for the next chapters and for it to be finished meh currently working on first chap of fanfic and will have it up as soon a finished
| alaskan-dracolych chapter 9 . 5/25/2009
Interesting idea. Most start earlier (I find most of these distasteful, Kyuubi being so OOC it kills the story), or later. But the middle of the wave arc? Strong enough to win the bridge battle w/o Kyuubi power, but not saving Haku? Very Nicely done. The scenes with Temari and Naruto seem a little off, but not so much as to break the willing suspension of disbelief, so that still works. I want to say a little fast, but that is not quite right. What you did with Sasuke, while it worked, and was unique, the thing with killing the kids was a little off. So is the thing about Hinata hardening her heart. Should be interesting to see the reprecautions of those acts. All in all, eagerly await your next chpter.
| monkeysrockdude chapter 9 . 5/23/2009
I think that Temari going to Myobokuzan is a great idea, it gives Temari more time alone with Naruto and gives them more time to bond. I love where this story is going and cant wait for the nexxt chapter
| Azotez chapter 9 . 5/23/2009
Wow, It's now 2am and I have just finished reading your story. I must say I'm impressed.
I really liked the originality of your story. Ofc, such stories have been done a thousands times already and although I have read my fair share of them, your story just kept surprising me.
You should defineatly hold onto this storie and continue to work on it. It could become epic.
How Pain was taken out that easily was somewhat anticlimatic, especially considering living in a ninja world has got to make S-class nukenin somewhat distrustful of everyone and everything, hell... thats the only reason they are still alive. The fact that Pain didn't have any safeguards in place to prevent exactly what happened is, disappointing, to say, at least.
The fact that Sasori, Deidara and Madara sprungs out of the ground right afterwards have most defineatly decreased your story's ovreall rating, though you still did the Sasori and especially Deidara fight in a satisfying manner
| spriterx chapter 9 . 5/23/2009
Great story. Can't wait for more:)
| Bobboky chapter 9 . 5/20/2009
| EDK chapter 9 . 5/20/2009
Hi man, it's me again... I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but I think you've really dropped the ball on this new chaper! While I normally enjoy your writing a lot, you do have the very bad habit of suddenly kicking your writing into overdrive, in a frantic attempt to tie up all the various loose ends in your stories just so you can finish a story off. And this time, it has resulted in you losing a lot of what was making this story a good read! The way you have Itachi take down three of the most powerful members of Akatsuki (even if you targeted the true [weakest] form of Pein and used the skills that worked best against the various members), along with several of their minions, before being taken down himself just feels a little off somehow... You could have made it a lot more longer and dramatic, in my personal opinion.
Also, the way you've twisted Hinata into nothing more a bitter shadow of her former self; filled with nothing but pure hatred towards the Sand Village and Termai in particular, really doesn't appeal to me! I hope that you have someone. maybe Gaara or even Naruto himself talk some sense into her (and explain what his exact relationship with Termai is), otherwise she's going to end up going down the same dark path as Sasuke or even Gaara (before he was snapped out of it thanks to Tenzou) did... And that can't end well for her! It just seems really OOC to me as well, since even when her cousin was beating her down in canon, she was still willing to forgive him and saw his pain.
Overall, I feel you may badly need to get back into practise with your writing of fanfiction stories after not having posted anything for quite so long (I think it's been several months since your last update)... That is, if you still have a passion for writing! My advice, always try to write a little every day if you can, it helps your creative juices flow easier and keeps you focused on your original goal of what exactly you set out to write...
| Cenright chapter 9 . 5/20/2009
It is so nice to see a REAL story for once, and not some canon clone. I am really enjoying your work and hope to see what you do with it. I have really liked all the connections you have made in everything.
I am only a little concerned about Hinata. Everything has fit so well together, and though I understand her anger, I believe you will have to be very careful how hateful you make her, or it will come off and too abrupt a change. You have led everyone else into their changes, and I think she will need to be rounded out a little. Confrontations with her, yes, but with her love for Naruto, I wouldn't expect her to do anything rash.
All in all, this is a story that I plan to check up on constantly, and I better check out you other stories too, since this one has made me very interested in your work.
| ravenknight117 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
keep it up its a very good story
| Master DK chapter 9 . 5/19/2009
love it keep updating
| Lady Logos chapter 5 . 5/19/2009
I like this story very much. Is fun, but entertaining, but still adventurous and unique.
Very good job with grammar and plot.
| KMT chapter 9 . 5/19/2009
and cool plan!
| garsdal chapter 9 . 5/19/2009
akatsuki is going to wound up fighting 2 toad sages without pein on their side:D
| Fangtooth chapter 9 . 5/19/2009
Hmm, pretty decent. I think you're fic is going to fast.
I really did not like how you progressed Naruto and Temari's relationship. It seems like you put them together just for the sake of it. Just like other generic NaruHina fics where he see's her and suddenly falls in love with her. It makes the pairing or relationship very shallow.