Reviews for Sage of the Leaf
NaruHarem4ever chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Awesome story. Well thought out and written, and its not a god fic from what I can see. Can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
kidneysrgood chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
interesting, maybe this will be even better than your other story.
DarkRavie chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
A very good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens in the next one.
Exploding Gears chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
brillant this is one of the better fanfics i'v read can't wait to see more

oh adding to c2 that omake was funny
Chopstickman chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
It doesn't take much to get a snowball rolling. I'm really looking forward to seeing just how far it'll roll
Omega the darkness chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Very interesting keep up the good work.
ganimation chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Nice start, I like where this is going,update soon.
the DragonBard chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Story has potential, but you're doing too much telling, not enough showing. It reads more as a synopsis rather than an actual story. Describe things more, and have more speaking.

My only other complaint is that Naruto didn't get to know Haku, and begin to understand about precious people. Sure, you have Naruto still think of them, but it feels a bit forced the way you did it.
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