Reviews for After All This Time
starfirexrin chapter 13 . 1/19
Please update
NaruHinadorablez chapter 5 . 1/1
Any lemons? T_T
NaruHinadorablez chapter 2 . 12/31/2014
Ohhhhh so cutee!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2014
At this time, Sakura couldn't have learned all that superhuman strength shit. I'll pretend it's Shippuden, so it makes more sense.
KandyKorn24 chapter 13 . 7/29/2013
Great story! Plus i guess its safe to say Sakura has completely lost her shit.
laponce.thompson chapter 13 . 7/10/2013
Great story, dude. You should probably make a sequel to this, I think.
hanshotfirst chapter 13 . 1/17/2013
Some grammar corrections... please! From a jealous, missing in love girl to a raging psycopath. That's what I hate about this. Sakura's too much. But overall, mate, Great Story. I hope you do more stories.
bestjinchuuriki chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
thank you! finally a fanficttion when naruto attempts to hit sakura, that *******
SilentMaelstrom chapter 12 . 7/3/2012
SO FINAL RESULTS
STORY5
PLOT7
PLOT HOLES 2
ENDING8
NARUHINA PAIRING9
SAKURA BASHING8
OCC-NESS 2
WEAK PLOTSTRING3
RANDOMESS1
NARUHINA FLUFF8
#FINAL RESULTS#
*53/100*
EPIC FAIL
WOULD YOU LIKE TO TRY AGAIN
(YES/NO)
I TRIED REALLY HARD ON THIS COMMENT -3-
SilentMaelstrom chapter 13 . 7/3/2012
wow suckyish
like so many plot holes
naruto is like 3 times stronger than sakura so no challenge
she just started training under tsunade for 2 weeks so agai like no skills beside minor medical justu
kakashi wouldt attack naruto with a leathal attack to save sakura
he would for sasuke yeah just cause kakashi's an asshole for sasuke
sakura cant use shadow clones she has pitiful reserves
for ninja you made them way to trusting especailly after the whole roof battle
only part i believe is sakura goin batshit crazy i mean shes all like ill betray the village for you sauke
2.5 years later i love you naruto
(meets sasuke again) i love u let me betray the village for you
SilentMaelstrom chapter 9 . 7/3/2012
so bad im sorry goodish plot but everything else bad

narutos hurt
what
well come with you
no i only need hinata
ok sure
then do nothing

and narutos clone guardig hinata why not make it takeher back
SilentMaelstrom chapter 6 . 7/3/2012
shadow clones?
WTF not even possible ad who wouldve taught her
is this a be a 3soome
no
anyway got major plot holes
max chapter 13 . 2/9/2012
cool! I hate that bitch sakura XP BUT i like the story
naruhinasakufan1 chapter 13 . 10/22/2011
oh my god you cant leave it like that! make a sequeal it deserve's one!
RisingMist chapter 13 . 10/18/2011
Ok! I'm glad you finished a part of it. I noticed that Sakura's punishment is very light. I think that she should not have been allowed to see Naruto since it would be detrimental to her mental health. Please write more naturally and leave the dramatic stuff for special situations. I hope you decide to fix the problems in the story before you continue writing any further.

Your story idea is good and has a lot of potential. I hope you fix these errors and reach new heights in your writing.

Good luck!
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