Reviews for The Ruins
jazmyn chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
this chapter is really amazing i cant wait for the next chapter
OniyuriGaaru chapter 3 . 6/30/2009
what the hell is going on? what the hell happened to bella and is the key to the attic?
acydrose chapter 3 . 6/30/2009
I'm loving this story so far :) I think I got an idea about what's happening, not sure. I love the eyes changing color, the eyes that Edward sees and the voice :) And Edward scared shitless and crying is great D
BriseisRose chapter 3 . 6/28/2009
I am so glad you came back to this story! It is so great. The story is very original and well-written so you have no idea how happy I am! That was a great chapter! We start to see Bella being haunted more and more. I really hope Edward finds her. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope the next update won't take as long as last time! XOXO
sparkling-stilettos chapter 3 . 6/28/2009
Hey you! I love this so far! It great to read a story that isn't all lovey-dovey and full of sexing! I can't wait to see where you take it and I love how creaptastic you are making it! Im almost afraid to turn the lights out..lol! Ps I love that show too! I always thought there would be ruins fot a while but I guess we are all a lil less permanent than we thought!
Maddy chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
I really liked the fantasy element
latuacantante4him chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
O! Enjoyed it. Can't wait for more.
EllabittenbyCullen chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
LOVE this story already I cant wait for next update!

Ella
yueyuuko chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
creepy

update soon
ITeachArtnTX chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
It sure looks like you have another winner. Your stories are so original and unique. I look forward to continuing this one as well as Paper Hearts.
beans and cornbread chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
I love a good mystery. Please update often. Looking forward to upcoming chapters.
SallyThePumpkinQueen chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
wow, I loved it, please update soon!
iLOVEjasper138 chapter 2 . 6/16/2009
update please!
BriseisRose chapter 2 . 6/9/2009
Wow. This is an amazing story. It looks like you have some great and original ideas. You also have a talent for writing. I really hopeyou continue with this story. It's so cool and I'd really like to see what's going on. I'd also like to see Edward and Bella's relationship grow. I feel so awkward when reading a story I like, but it doesn't get finished, and this is definitely a story I'd love to read! Can you please e-mail me to tell me if you plan on continuing please? I like to take stories off my alert list if you don't plan on continuing. I hope you do though! Thanks! X
CassieSu chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Please continue. I've been waiting for an update on this storyu and have recommended it to others.

Thank you.
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